Amazing story! Well written and the characters feel like they do in the books. You could pass of as DD if you wanted to! Can't wait for the next book. You should write an epilogue for that one too!

This is absolutely 100% in-character and perfect and beautiful, and i simply cannot. WOMAN. HOW YOU DO THIS TO ME? [The voice in the back of my head (which is not as cool as Bobo) keeps suggesting that you are not, in fact, the robotamputee from tumblr but someone else with a frighteningly coincidental name. If that's the case, i'm SO sorry. But i'm pretty sure it's not _]

No but actually i'm in love with this story, and my Juanopher shipper heart is doing cartwheels. 3

Loved the story, you nailed each character, in my opinion, and you gave me something to help tide me over until the next book comes out :) Great job!

Very sweet and humorous. You've done a wonderful job at getting down Duane's narrative tone and the characters' voices. Thanks for sharing!

Nice. I especially liked Carmela. You did a good job keeping everyone in character.

this was soooo cute! i loved it :)

Very nice! :) I loved it! :)

Awwwwwwwww! That was so awesome! I thought they were pretty in character, which is saying something for some of the fics in this archive...Good job!

Yay! I've wanted to read a story just like this for so long. I even tried writing one, but couldn't make it right. So thank you! The characters were true to form, the dialogue was engaging and funny, and it was well written.

You know, that line is used a lot. "They vanished." "She vanished." "He vanished." *grins*

Mutant love. Oh how loverly it is! Nice touch of humor there, Helena's "mutant" theory. Did you hear the name of the next book? Take a look online, "Young Wizards book 10 title" if you haven't! Synopsis is online too, courtesy of the great Diane Duane.

Its very cute! A nice, fluffy read

I loved it! It was completely in character and there were no spelling errors! This deserves to go in my favorites. Though I do have one correction in the fanfiction, it's not "Kretef", it's "Khretef". Aside from that, it's perfect. :)