Wow, really loved this one. I hope to read more soon.

This was really sweet. It's nice how you had them work through it.

Jo's been driving me crazy recently but you actually made me forgive her a bit. Good stuff. You write the relationship connection very well.

i love it! continue with this madness please )

Nice. I love how you had them work through Jo's anxiety about the situation and you wrote her character really well. I'm sure Zane is just that stubborn too, lol. I'm a bit picky on how Zane is written because 1) well, he's hot and a total bad boy on the show and him and Jo are just so cute together! he's my fave character,lol, and 2) well, it's just easier for me to write in his POV. anyway, got off topic, lol, i tend to do that. anyway, he was a little more...hm, subdued (?), well, not quite as "Zane" as he could be. anyway, your writing is fantastic and it was very good for the first time writing a Eureka fic.

Bravo-SyFy can't cancel imagination!

I had the exact same conversation with my current boyfriend after a really tough break up with my ex-boyfriend. Ok, so my ex didn't disappear with a wormhole change and time travel issues. He was just a jerk, but the same fears apply in starting a new relationship.

I really felt your emotions in this story. It felt really honest and raw. I think your Zane might be a little out of character, but that's ok. He's also awesome and incredibly sweet. Those same responses helped me fall in love with my current boyfriend and made me fall a little bit for your Zane.:)

Thanks for writing. We really need the love since Syfy is breaking our hearts!

I had the exact same conversation with my current boyfriend after a really tough break up with my ex-boyfriend. Ok, so my ex didn't disappear with a wormhole change and time travel issues. He was just a jerk, but the same fears apply in starting a new relationship.

I really felt your emotions in this story. It felt really honest and raw. I think your Zane might be a little out of character, but that's ok. He's also awesome and incredibly sweet. Those same responses helped me fall in love with my current boyfriend and made me fall a little bit for your Zane.:)

Thanks for writing. We really need the love since Syfy is breaking our hearts!