I've enjoyed this story very much. I thought the plot was very interesting, with Max in the dark about Logan's survival trying to save her brother Zack and Logan looking to start a new life in San Francisco. I read the story in one night hoping that it would last long enough for Max and Logan to be reunited so I was sorry that it ended before that. I thought the way Lydecker was portrayed was also interesting, but I was a little confused by his drinking in the middle of a mission. However, I was probably reading the story too quickly at that point hoping that it would have a more definitive ending.

It is a great story so far, loving the near misses they are having hear and there, but why are 90% of the stories on this sight left unfinished? That is so annoying to get waist deep into a good story and have no end to it

Ok, so far, so sad, but a god read none the less. I do think Max would have been a little more distraught, but after this sad set up I am looking forward to the story getting lighter and bringing logan back lol.

Only wanted to read the first chapter but ended on fast-reading the whole story instead of studying.

Is there any chance you'll finish this? Even if not, it's still a gripping mix of action story and good characterizations;-)

I cant wait any longer! when are you gonna update? this story is awesome!

I guess three short instalments is better than nothing. Keep it coming. I want to see the end of this!

Thanks a lot for coming back. I'll have to go all the way back to chapter 1 and start reading again.

I do love this story. I can hardly wait for Max and Logan togetherness.

yay! ohh excellent work. i'm so glad you updated. i was totally suprised that max didn't kick zack's ass, i would have. i eagerly await the next chapter. keep up the awesome work!

Good chapter. Max and Logan will meet soon, won't they? You won't keep them apart for so long, right?

Anyway, good work. Zack is a strong character in your story, too. I like it.

Great story. I hope you update soon. Otto showing up is unexpected but cool. I really want to see Max and Logan together. Take pity and make it soon.

This is excellent. I hadn't read it before. More soon please:)

OMG OMG An update. I'd all but given up hope (in the DA universe you never give up). Haven't actually read it yet...but I know it will be great based soley on the anticipation factor. Please post again soon. :-)

hey it's been over a year since your last update , we really wanna know what's gonna happen and are looking forward to more. please finish this incredible fic. you are so close to the end!

Ok...enough is enough. I've just reread this whole story and I want more! Come on, you can't just leave it here!

this is a great story, and i know it's angst but can max & logan have a lil' time together? ya know, where they're happy together (ie a lil romance?)