Ohhhh. Good writing. Why am I sitting her crying?

Oh god...that last line got to me...a lot. "I hope not Ani. I hope you never do." talk about foreshadowing...

Amazing. Excellent grammar, good plotline...overall a really well-executed one-shot. I've seen really crass, awful stories being described as 'short and sweet', if I could go back in time and message them, I would provide them the link to this story and tell them that this is what short and sweet really means. Also I love how you ended it by Obi-Wan telling Anakin that he hopes Anakin never gets used to all that's involved in being a Jedi. I love it!

I always imagined that Obi-Wan and Anakin had a good relationship. Before Palpatine latched onto Anakin.

Very nice.

Aww, cute,widdle Ani.

Wasn't this in a book?

Loved these - such a wonderful and bittersweet moment between our two boys.