I thought your story was very well written and excellent. I could not have thought of a true developed story myself. Such hope for the future of Lois and Clark. Your story brings imagination for me and hopefully everyone in the fanfiction site. Well done and giving you a thousand praise for the story.

Thought the story was awesome. Well thought out, good interaction with charavters.

AGJones

I have reread this a few times already..I loved it..It was so good I had to read it all.

Just wanted to let you know i have read this story 4 times now and it is definately in my top three lois and clark stories. It's intense.

That was great i loved it

that was the best!

Yip, liked it. There is some part missing between chapters 3 and 4. Can you send it to me please? If you do, please send it in the body of the e-mail, rather than as an attachment, otherwise I might delete it.

Thank you.

Vilya74

I really like this story. I have been a fan of all things superman since i could formed ears and eys so anything even remotely related to it i like. This ia good.

Awesome story! I couldn't peel my eyes away for five seconds! This should have been an episode!

Wow! This is looking really good! Can't wait to find out the ending! Keep it up!

this story is awesome ... I'm so glad there's a next chapter... keep up the good work

A nice, neat little episode...

that was so good! ;) keep writing

great story! can't wait to read the rest! )

This is a good start: you've got a good A-plot going, and an interesting B-plot too. You really need to get someone to edit this for punctuation, though. But I'm afraid I'm an impatient reader; I was very disappointed to discover that this is only the first chapter and that you haven't written any more yet. I'm unlikely to read any more until the story is finished.

To the other reviewers here: new L&C fanfic is 'published' every week at the Lois and Clark Fanfiction Archive, at .com. And all the stories on that archive are edited for spelling and grammar before they're uploaded, so you won't have to wade through dozens of errors.