Cool Fic.

Long ago, this was one of the first fan fiction favorites I ever read! Although it was sad, I still loved how the story came together! It makes me wonder what would've happenedhad Lita chose Jeff instead... x33

yeah i read this again lol, i just had to tell you that this was written so so so beautifully i just loved it, it always makes me tear up...i mean gosh! Awesome job, keep up the great work

aw! that was so sad, i mean it made me cry! The way you wrote it was just wow...i mean really WOW! i loved it! keep up the good work

i loved it. i still not sure who i wanted lita to get with. it was a great fic

Awwwwww!

Beautifully sad!

that was gr8 and so sad! i like lita/edge and lita/jeff! thats wat made me soo sad! please put another chapter up!

That was a good story but I felt sorry for Jeff well anyway that was a very lovely story I hope to find more storys you wrote well got to go bye.

Wow. I read this after noticing "He Wishes For the Clothes of Heaven" was the sequel to it. Decided to read this first. I loved it. The Edge/Lita/Jeff angle was really well done and you nailed all realistic emotions of there's perfectly. Having Jeff recite that poem was perfect too and for some reason, this line really made me feel for Jeff:

After a pause she heard him whisper, "You didn't hear the answer."

So sad. You nailed it perfectly.

MWAH!

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OH MY GOD! THAT WAS SO GOOD! I LOVE THE JEFF/LITA/EDGE COMBO. Justa few minor spelling mistakes but i loved it except for poor Jeff. Poor, poor jeff. Anyways, you should really write another one like that!

I'm such a sucker for Jericho/Steph stories. I liked how you portrayed the characters in the story. Really enjoyed it. :)

Nice reference to Regal and his "slang" I like the story with Jericho and Steph.

What about MATT! I love Matt, well this was very creative of you and indeed sweet! I love Jeffery too! I'm just a big Amy(Lita)/Matthew fan, what can I say, they are cute togther! I like your idea here though!

Hollyann

The Creator of hardyzlayer. / Home of XTREME FANsty FICTION.

I LOVE Edge/Lita and Jeff/Lita fics. The only thing I didn't like about this one was that jeff didn't get to be with lita. But then again , if jeff would have been with her i would have then been sad that edge wasn't with lita. I'm so hard to please . lol ! Great job !