That was HILARIOUS and sweet and painful and awesome all at once. Great job.

Oh no, not Vincent. Now everyone will know. lol Great story.

This was really unique. I like your characterization of Zane. He's a little more angry then many other fanfics and it made this really intriguing since we have seen this Zane with a bit more destructive tendencies. I liked your Jo too. Great job!

This is the second time I've read this (nice distraction from being mad at SyFy), and I had to sign in to say how good it is. Zane would have a right to be ticked off by the good enough to sleep with but little else waffling by Jo in this timeline, although they played his irritation more for laughs on the show. I think you captured how he'd react perfectly. And Vincent running into the mailbox was hilarious!

Zane's "not a piece of meat!" Lol! A little different but I liked it!

wow, didn't expect that ending. lol, poor vincent! loved the story though. Jo would definitely be that anxious about Zoe coming home and everything.