|Reviews for kamen Rider OOO Redux|
| code R.R 9/24/11 . chapter 16
oh so the plot thickens
| Kamen Rider Chrome 8/29/11 . chapter 14
Hi, KAMEN RIDER CHROME here. I read your fic from start to finish and as much as I like this I think you can do better in terms of character development and the scene transition. I like fight scenes in KR fics but you need to improve on choreography and be more descriptive. I have nothing to complain about the characters though. They all have a specific role to play in Scott's 'normal' life, even the jocks and cheerleaders who rule the school. And well I also like how you created an original storyline. Well done. But you could make the chapters longer, more details and etc. Nothing to complain about when it comes to grammar though. That's the good thing. I like the combos too, but that's all standard OOO. So, good luck and improve your skills. I'll be keeping an eye on you.
| brave kid 8/29/11 . chapter 14
well great story,i love how ooo would be in the states,and i like this version more,please keep it up
| code R.R 8/23/11 . chapter 8
good as ever keep them roiling
is he keeping the reptile combo?
| code R.R 8/17/11 . chapter 5
so the mayor has the purple medals hmm
so the question is does he have all of them?
| code R.R 8/11/11 . chapter 2
you are quick man so it is a au ankh doesn't have the other medals
can't wait for the other changes you make
when i first heard the octopus i really thought it was taco i was loling
| code R.R 8/11/11 . chapter 1
a nice au with using inage wounder what ankh said him