I love this story.

THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVER! It's the best one on this entire site! You are an awesome writer! Keep writing!

This story was great! The part in Ch. 5, about the 'guide' being Orion Pax, that just blew me away! Cool idea. I've also read the first story in your 'Children of Primus' series, and thought it was amazing, too. I love the way you write. I'm off to read Part 3 now!

Do I need to tell you how much I love you're fics?^^: Awsome though.I hope you write more TF.

Gripping. I'm looking forward to reading the third in the series. I also like the way you've taken care with the characterization of your background characters... Cyclonus, Magnus, Soundwave... even with the Primes and Megatron being most of the story. Details, gotta love 'em.