such an adorable story! I'm gonna' cry! i can't believe king veggie brains didn't value his son b/c his wife died when he was born! how rude! but i guess maybe that's why vegeta is the way he is. Oh well it's still cute!

omg! that's so sweet! i feel so sorry for Vegeta... a gr8 fic

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Golden Rain

That was great Mystical Jade. I liked the flashbacks of Vegeta's past. The stuff about his mother dying at childbirth was cool! He was a little emotional sometimes, but I guess it was necessary. :) But I liked how concerned he was for Bulma, so it was good.

Awwwwwwww. That was so sweet! Great story.

Finally! I get the time to read this! lol

You knew I would of course, right? Can't turn down a good Vegeta fic. _

*Reads*

Cool what you did at the beginning dealing with Vegeta going to see his father in his dream and stuff. You are foreshadowing how his character is for the show anyway. Now we have a reason *why* he is the way he is just from the very beginning. _

Cool! You addressed the tail thing too! Now we know why it didn't work when Goku tried it. No wait, he tried that on Radditz...well, you know what I mean, right?

Hmm, at least now I know what happened to Vegeta's mother. I always wondered about that. Is that true btw? I don't even know.

lol! I love how Vegeta says stuff like that to Bulma and calls her "woman." lol I always have. I just think it's cute because Bulma doesn't take it. lol

*Claps*

That was a great story. Cute at the end too. You've always been good at DBZ stories. _

You know, with all the hundreds of DBZ movies, seems they would've had one about Vegeta and his past or something like that. Okay, I know I'm exaggerating about the amt of movies thing, but ya get what I mean. lol

it may have been done before, but htis very good so i don't care, good job!

Wow...just...wow. Very good, Jade-chan! Very very good! And it was sweet what Veggie said about being the best father...Wow(yes, again). Me likes! _'

Someone once said that there are no original idea, only original people with ideas. So the idea's been done, and you did it, but you did it well. Poetic, maybe slightly OOC, but given the circumstances, extremely understandable and most enjoyable. Wonderful! .;;

that was beautiful _ i dont know what else to say, that was so awesome it's indescribable! that fic did more than justice to my pic, that was just... DUDE!