Definitely haunting. I don't know that I've seen too many 2nd person fics, so this is definitely unique. I think that really added an urgency to it that you wouldn't have had in another perspective.

I just watched that episode a few days ago, and I have yet to pass my hallway mirror in the dark (and passing that mirror is necessary to get upstairs and to my bed. I always duck under the mirror O.o ) But anyways, i liked this fanfic. Gives us more about what he was thinking, especially with the revelation of his 'dark' secret. Can't wait to read more from you! :)