|Reviews for Demon Family|
| Guest 2/8/13 . chapter 1
Many flaws with your story. Main one is how all the words are mushed together into one giant paragraph. You should look at other fanfics as references when making one, so you don't mess up like this.
I like the idea of KyuubixOC, because i like Kurama(Kyuubi) being paired with someone, but it gets old when its just Naruto, and i don't like him/her to be paired with any of the regular Naruto characters.
Well... this is all just my opinion. I think you should at least listen to the first part of what i said, this has the ability to become a great story.
| Pi3 11/21/11 . chapter 5
I like this fic but sometime is dificult for me read it,after all I'm not English and its dificult for me as you are writing it.