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Fprmr1 4/21/12 . chapter 1
I love your writing style! Please write more Rayella! You made me love this awesome couple even more!
Alaska Is Beautiful 12/17/11 . chapter 1
Ha! Wow. Every single story I've read by you is amazing. And this was no disappointment. Kanks. I couldn't help laughing. I would commend you of your writing skills, but I'm pretty sure you don't need any more of that. So...I guess I'll stop.
DramaQueen127 11/21/11 . chapter 1
ok i laughed my head on ! LOVE IT, i think when i get a bf if u never say he at least likes me im going to do stellas monologue and im going to tell him to read this story so he can say love if and the like dosent cover it, and why the heck is i love u so hard to say ? its like, i like u but a little bit more meaning but basicly the samel, and i loved the part where me SPLATed the bug lol D
freefallingup 11/14/11 . chapter 1
Stella's little monologue was hilarious, and jealous Ray is always adorable.

All though I do feel sorry for the bug...
Everybodyelse027 11/6/11 . chapter 1
Hey you! :)) i read this like a hundred times and over and over again! AWESOMEEE! I LOVE YOU BUG! :))))
JEK623 11/1/11 . chapter 1
I LOVE YOU BUG! -Lol-

-Loved it. Random and amazing and well written. lol.
TurnDreamsIntoReality 10/20/11 . chapter 1
Okay i personally am not the biggest rayella fan, but this was just too hilarious and cute! I love the whole bug thing! This just made my day 3
punnylove 9/10/11 . chapter 1
Aw, so cute! Hope you write more!
TheRightWrongs 9/9/11 . chapter 1
oh jeez you need to give me a minute...

-kay that is by far one of the funniest and sweetest things I've read on here. can this happen for real or..
SaguaroCactus 9/5/11 . chapter 1
Awww... Poor bug. It had a short love life only to have its dreams, and its body, crushed. :)

I love how you did Ray's confession.
Imthatonegurl 8/17/11 . chapter 1
Love jealous Ray, and great story. Loved the way you made it realistic and got it to flow so well.
Time-Lady-Lindy 8/15/11 . chapter 1
Wow,Ray had some REAL competition.*sarcasm*

Great story. :D
illustrate 8/13/11 . chapter 1
Aww, I loved this! So cute and I felt so bad for the little bug in the end (despite my mondo hatred for ze icky insects) :D
toughchick44 8/12/11 . chapter 1
I love this, ecspecially the end and keep writing because if you stop there wont be that many amusing Rayella stories.
Bubblelina15 8/12/11 . chapter 1
I love it! (See I have no problem using the 'l' word, or at least one of them, lol). Especially, the whole bug monologue.
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