 Fprmr1 4/21/12 . chapter 1I love your writing style! Please write more Rayella! You made me love this awesome couple even more! |
 Alaska Is Beautiful 12/17/11 . chapter 1Ha! Wow. Every single story I've read by you is amazing. And this was no disappointment. Kanks. I couldn't help laughing. I would commend you of your writing skills, but I'm pretty sure you don't need any more of that. So...I guess I'll stop. |
 DramaQueen127 11/21/11 . chapter 1ok i laughed my head on ! LOVE IT, i think when i get a bf if u never say he at least likes me im going to do stellas monologue and im going to tell him to read this story so he can say love if and the like dosent cover it, and why the heck is i love u so hard to say ? its like, i like u but a little bit more meaning but basicly the samel, and i loved the part where me SPLATed the bug lol D |
 freefallingup 11/14/11 . chapter 1Stella's little monologue was hilarious, and jealous Ray is always adorable.
All though I do feel sorry for the bug... |
 Everybodyelse027 11/6/11 . chapter 1Hey you! :)) i read this like a hundred times and over and over again! AWESOMEEE! I LOVE YOU BUG! :)))) |
 JEK623 11/1/11 . chapter 1I LOVE YOU BUG! -Lol-
-Loved it. Random and amazing and well written. lol. |
 TurnDreamsIntoReality 10/20/11 . chapter 1Okay i personally am not the biggest rayella fan, but this was just too hilarious and cute! I love the whole bug thing! This just made my day 3 |
 punnylove 9/10/11 . chapter 1Aw, so cute! Hope you write more! |
 TheRightWrongs 9/9/11 . chapter 1oh jeez you need to give me a minute...
-kay that is by far one of the funniest and sweetest things I've read on here. can this happen for real or.. |
 SaguaroCactus 9/5/11 . chapter 1Awww... Poor bug. It had a short love life only to have its dreams, and its body, crushed. :)
I love how you did Ray's confession. |
 Imthatonegurl 8/17/11 . chapter 1Love jealous Ray, and great story. Loved the way you made it realistic and got it to flow so well. |
 Time-Lady-Lindy 8/15/11 . chapter 1Wow,Ray had some REAL competition.*sarcasm*
Great story. :D |
 illustrate 8/13/11 . chapter 1Aww, I loved this! So cute and I felt so bad for the little bug in the end (despite my mondo hatred for ze icky insects) :D |
 toughchick44 8/12/11 . chapter 1I love this, ecspecially the end and keep writing because if you stop there wont be that many amusing Rayella stories. |
 Bubblelina15 8/12/11 . chapter 1I love it! (See I have no problem using the 'l' word, or at least one of them, lol). Especially, the whole bug monologue. |