|Reviews for The girl in the alley and the man in awe|
| Thre3 3/31/12 . chapter 2
Sounds good so far...
| Rae Nightling 8/12/11 . chapter 2
This sounds like a cool story. But it sounds maybe a little Mary sue-ish. And fix your grammar, mainly capitalization. Most people will stop reading after the first couple lines if the grammar is bad.