I like the idea of a Yoyo X Jazz couple alot. I liked the little Jet Set Radio calls too, they were pretty funny. I have to say when Yoyo said Jazz had saved him from the Noise Tanks, I could not help but kind of want a story about Jazz rescuing Yoyo. Anyway, I like this story and I hope you will make more Jet Set Radio storys.

i read the last sentence first and spoiled the story for myself lol... it looks good though lol

I like it. Well done. And yes I do like the Jazz/Yoyo pairing. Heck, it doesm't matter who you pair Jazz with, as long as it's Jazz.

nice, but weird, I would have never thought of a Jazz/Yo-yo romance, tee Hee

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Eek! YoyoxJazz! ..

Well, that was pretty good, better than your last fic in my opinion! Nice description and variety with the fight scenes and it was an okay plot. You like Yo-Yo and Jazz, don't you? As I think I already said, I don't have JGRF so I don't have an opinion on Jazz and Clutch pairings, but this one seems okay. Only two complaints: (1) if this follows on from your last fic, you should really put it as Chapter 2 of that one, rather than a new fic in its own right, and (2) why did only the boys run out when they heard Jazz scream? It was nice of them and all, but I don't think the girls would have just sat there when one of their friends started yelling. Give them some credit! But apart from that, good.