| Reviews for Time's Secret |
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Professor Severus Snape's Wife 1/27/13 . chapter 6great story! |
Siffy Ela 1/26/13 . chapter 16Aww! I've enjoyed this story so much! It was great! |
Luna de Papel 1/26/13 . chapter 16I've enjoyed immensely this take on the use of a time turner that works both ways. The first chapter alone got me hooked and couldn't leave your story alone until the end. Thanks for not breaking my heart! |
Judith Shakespeare 10/14/12 . chapter 16Aww, I like this story! Fascinating twist to the time-turner idea; this is the first story I've read in which Severus time-travels, not Hermione. I was slightly confused during the first chapter, but it turned out to be really sweet. Thanks so much for the read! |
Jo Suzuki 9/19/12 . chapter 16To be honest, I wasn't so sure how this would turn out when I started reading it! :P But it turned out to be rather charming and I finished it in one sitting! :D Good work! Thank you! :') |
elena 7/12/12 . chapter 16 I like it. Couple of wee points. Phineas' surname is Nigellis (i am unaure of the spelling) not Black and when draco is thinking about nagini i think you mean accursed, pretty sure you're missing an s. However i have enjoyed far worse fanfiction and it was a pleasure to read something so realistic emotionally sound and well written. Thank you. |
snapify52 6/24/12 . chapter 5Wonderful! I love Phineas as a mischievous plot-device. Mwahahaha! |
Montara 6/5/12 . chapter 16It's my first story with Severus time-traveling. It was interesting that the Unspeakables punished him for time-traveling, that he made an infraction and payed for it. In a lot of fanfics the main character is above the law. Well, at the end they did manage to evade the law... I loved the ending, not to syrupy but you can see their love and support. I wonder what will Draco do if Lucius won't approve of his Muggle? :D Your story was a great read and I thank you for sharing it with us! |
Natasha2014 5/7/12 . chapter 16I LOVED it! This is one of the best written stories that I have ever read and I am so happy I found it! Amazing job at keeping both characters in character so to speak:) |
Seyfert 4/2/12 . chapter 16I really liked this story, good, original take on timeturners! :) Your characterisations were really good too! |
TenshiFushigi 4/2/12 . chapter 16This is a great story, very interesting and charming. I've already sent you a private message but I guess you didn't see it ( I would love to translate this story into Russian but I need your perission to publish it on a Russian fanfiction web-site. So I really wait for your answer |
Guest 3/18/12 . chapter 16 Great fic! Great time-turner idea! It felt as though I were in a soap opera...does he know? does he know she knows? Hmm...the best parts. Definitely the "get together" chapter...when they both get all tetchy and nervous...unable to even look at each other. It take courage to do what they both did...to ask all the questions and to guess that one of them is trying to push the other away b/c of insecurities. Liked how you used Phineas to shake things up...and how Snape just couldn't obliviate himself...and for realizing that Lily was just about the guilt. Well done! And thanks for writing a T rated fic. It's easy to rely on vulgar language and sex when writing...much harder and creative to focus and build on character depth and plot. Way to go! |
Separate Ways 2/29/12 . chapter 16Hehe, I love the final line. Perhaps a little OOC on Snape's part, but it was an interesting read that managed to capture my attention. Good job. |
MetamorphmagusLupin 2/29/12 . chapter 16Oh... It was SO good! I really enjoyed this and was so happy when they finally got together! Poor Ron, though... lol. Now that I've read it, I almost want a sequel-to see how Severus and Hermione fair in the years to come. ;-) |
JoseiKeitoLuluiCZ 2/26/12 . chapter 16Aww, that was sweet D I really loved this story, really good idea D I must tell you, that I cried more then one time. Your story touched my heart, I am glad, that I read it D And also, I wanted to praise you for the parts with Draco, they was awesome, and the meeting of Draco and Ron was just like I thought it would be... D Ah, and sorry for my bad eglish |