Bring Lina back, it is very unjust to take away Lina! I love the story, and I can't wait for the X/Fness! P.S. I'm not a justice freak like Amelia, but I just had to say that because taking Lina away is unjust

YES! I want Lina back! Oh please, OH PLEASE bring Lina back. Let Lina and Gourry be together like they are supposed to. Don't let this happen. T-T. I want to see the next chapter and I want to see Lina come back, so bai!
BlueJellyfish _

KEwl story I can hardly wait to find out what happens.

Pretty good, Vipersischan! Interesting writing style. oO It's somewhat like a script. Keep writing!

next chapter pleaaasssssseeee? and another thing, yes... yes... bring Lina back! um... please? pretty please? pretty please with sugar on top?

Xel/Fi moments! YAY! :waves Xel/Fi flag: Do bring Lina back at a crucial point in the story! Right when everyone's about to be fried, in comes Lina with... a dragon slave! Amelia can do a justice dance in celebration or something... that would make for some really cute Lina/Gourry moments too (gotta love those!). Write more! _

Wai! Good ficcie!

No one knows Ceiphied's personality so he's a blank slate for you. _

Black magic stems from Mazoku's power so Black magic would also be wiped out if the astral plane is destroyed along with the mazoku, no more black magic.

Yay X/F Goodness! _

And an intersting thing, (I believe this I don't know if it is a fact) is that all living beings have a presence on the astral plane. Minor but still there.

O_o The bad guy could be big trouble.

I hope you write more and that my information has helped in any minor way possible. _

more! more! more! more! *whips author* *runs as author casts a dragon slave* Pleeeeaasee! pretty pleasse with sugar on top!

yay! I killed off Lina! *looks at all the angry fans* ano...yipe? I will add more chapters as soon as possible!

Digi-riven: ano, to be honest, I haven't seen Slayers Next, Try, or Great. everything about Xellos and Filia I get from fanfics like yours! will try though. arigato!

Tamra: should I tell you? naaaaaah! this is my fic after all! _;

everyone else: arigato gozaimasu! gald you like it!

arigato to sayonara! _

ooowww... that's sad... sniff... and she's my fav chara too... anyway next chapter please?

Hi, Viperwolf! OMG, this is soooo sad! I can't believe that LINA is dead, of all people! I luv L/G fics, please bring her back to life! This is a magic world after all!

Oh course it's your fic. lol

*Tamra*

_ Yay fic. More fic? So far so, so good?

*huge kawaii hopeful eyes* Filia / Xellos?

I really really like this! PLEASE write more!

Yay! Another traditional couple supporter! *dances around being insane like always* Sorry, I love Zel/Ame Lina/Gourry Stuff. Good job! Poor Lina! Poor Gourry! I want to see lots of Ame Zel stuff k? I've got my eye on you! Keep up the good work!

This is soo sad to begin with, but I can't wait to see where it goes.