Reviews for The First Time
rann 12/3/11 . chapter 3
What a lovely idea!
Bunny1 11/3/11 . chapter 3
SO sweet! Oh, I love it... I could see Marguerite and Roxton having known each-other once-upon-a-time... I could, I think their destinies were entertwined...
Clari 9/5/11 . chapter 3
That was a BEAUTIFULL STORY! wow thank you very much for posting!
ann 8/24/11 . chapter 3
I have one thing to say:Loved your story and thank you for giving Marguerite and Roxton a love story for a lifetime and her Jack back And a very happy love like to see other writers top here s to jack and his you for a wonderful ending for Marguerite and roxtons happy ever after love story.
Snowy 8/17/11 . chapter 3
Excellent story and so true to the characters. Just the right length. Hope there is an epilogue at the inland sea.
daniM 8/14/11 . chapter 3
beautiful! miss this incredible series of fic
Ice Queen 8/13/11 . chapter 3
Love the story. Sweet and amusing. Please keep writing!