Nice fic ! Short and balanced. Only one comment : It would have been great if Spiking had put an other £20 on the bet.

I like it a lot! I love how you show how close everybody in the office is :)

Nice to see you in this section! I like the different POV of this story and look forward to your next one. :-)

You found a very interesting way of looking at things-through the eyes of Chas and Spikings! "Out of darkness" had a really good plot and I always thought it should have been made into a two-parter. I really enjoyed this chapter and hope to read more soon.

Great little one-shot.

I liked the fact that it was from Chas and Spiking's viewpoint which we haven't seen before. Their relationship was portrayed acurately and I think the story was short enough to manage without Dempsey & Harry actually being in it.

Clever how Chas' knowledge of them dating ties in with the title.

I hope you've got more 'Demparry' in the pipeline!

Real nice, enjoyed that. Always good fun to have a different view. You've got great potential. Thanks. Hope to read some more from you.

Well done for finding a new angle. Throughly enjoyed reading that. I liked the idea of seeing more through Chas' eyes and the happy twist at the end.

Spikings and Chas both in characte.