This hurts so much, because its true. When I first watched the episode with the Raconos I was angry at him because Donna had to move him.

and When the Parallel world showed up It really hit hard that he didn't think that a life without Rose was a life worth living. And that in itself is what makes this beautiful. Because he could very well have been thinking this.

Probably how he really did feel underneathe the Thames with the Racnoss Queen. And yet, we all know Rose makes the impossible possible & saves him again. :) 3 Great story.

o god i love you, this was absolutely heart-wrenching! you leave me no choice, i have to read every single one of your stories now, you magnificent magnificent human being!

now that would have only happened if he suddenly went stupid. *nod*

*SNIFF* Poor Doctor! With no Rose, and no Donna he's so depressed... :( Very good story by the way.

This story is so powerful. The last line delivers the entire story like a sledgehammer. Magnificent.

Good one-shot, even if it kind of breaks my heart.

Ooooh, he is SO lucky Rose has no idea what's happening here, because can you imagine the slap she would give him? Donna too... and now I'm having a beautiful image of the TARDIS, witnessing this, being all "Hells *no*" and vwoorping in to save the day. (Ah, note how I run roughshod over the sad story and force it happy!)

So sad :( But good! I really liked it, very well written.

Had a bad day, dear? I have to say that if this in answer to my request that you get back at Thete for being abominably rude, then you have risen to the occasion admirably. Jareth, in particular seems very amused. He has yet to stop teasing Thete over this. Jarod's disappeared off somewhere. He said something about skydiving... That boy, always looking for a new experience. Frankly, I'm too tired to beg for an update on Long History, so I'll beg for one on Never Quite Simple instead. It's been at least six months now hasn't it?

oh no doctor T-T

Very sad! I am so glad Donna and Rose were able to stop this awful parallel world from happening.

Ooh, beautifully dark. Like tendrils of shadow wrapping around, slowly drowning out the light until that last line.

TSG

I... um... I cried. D: Brava.

Great job!