Wonderfully written story! Very funny!

I wonder how calm Cloud will feel when they wake up? Please enlighten us soon!

Please update soon this is a great time travel fanfic

i love this story do you know of any similar time travel stories that involve Sephiroth and Cloud? Please and thankyou it looks awesome you should really update

Oh wow. This was fucking hilarious! I do so wish there were more of it...

Oh. Muhgod. That was an amazing first chapter! I never review until the last chapter, but I had to tell you how great that was. Made my day, and since it's finals week, I am SO unbelievably grateful for that! When Zack started tearing up about how 'grown up' cloud was, I had this incredible picture of Zack as Maes Hughes from FMA, which makes Cloud elysia but let's not go there... Lol maybe that makes him Ed. That's a bit better...(**)

This is great! I love Cloud as a dominating lover. Does that mean Sephiroth is going to be the more submissive one? That's a stupid question, isn't it? Cloud doesn't enjoy penetration. So... never mind about that question. Anyway, I really enjoyed reading this fic and was wondering when the next chapter is. Your amazing, so I can't wait! Bye!

I clicked on this story because I've certainly never seen a plot like it before, but I've been disappointed. Why is Cloud such a dick? I find it weird that the other characters find him slagging off people he's never met before amusing. How is that an attractive character trait? I certainly don't find assholes charming. There also seems to be bashing of women in general. Every female OC seems to be put in the story to be shown as an airheaded bitch there to be exposed to Cloud's 'wit,' which then gets Sephiroth hot and bothered. I'm mystified by authors that hate on their own gender.

I quit reading this around the 3rd chapter full of secretary-bashing, so perhaps the story changes later on and Cloud stops being such an OOC douche. I can't really be bothered reading any more of this to find out.

guh. spluh. PLEASE tell me you haven't dropped this! it pretty much made my entire week. well written, creative, I haven't read a fanfic I enjoyed this much in a loooong time. drunk/impaired cloud's interactions with sephiroth... couldn't stop grinning :) thank you very much

ah... 'am half asleep, so apologies in advance for the lake-luster review.

...I'll just say I rather enjoined reading this - what there is of it. I found the characters - and world - believable as well as entertaining. And I enjoined the quirky-ness of the character interaction.

The last chapter I found to be a little jerky - in places - and I don't fully understand why you brought the 'nice' man from the train back into it only to slander him - unless to point out the difference between 'Zack' and Cloud's thought process, or something.

And that Cloud is remembering 'Zack's activities as well an memories. I mean surely no EVERYONE in Midgar is... mean (for a lack of a better word)?

...But then again if you don't trust anyone - sort-of - then I suppose Cloud might see it that way...

I must admit I'm rather fond of the Cloud/Sephiroth interaction in this - that and I find it rather refreshing to pick up something in which neither of the main characters are a wimpy bitch (for a lack of a better way of putting it) - you may or may not be surprised at how some authors butcher some characters.

I, personally, find it AGONIZING when a character - such as Sephiroth - is changed so completely, and stripped so entirely of his "much-ness", that he's barely recognizable, just so that he fits the 'sub' stereotype. I mean it's not like he can't kick ass, be stronger then his dom and still be a sub.

Sorry, minny rant. Found a slew of those a while ago, drove me batty.

Though I will admit there are SOME stories out their in which that set-up can work and is justified through story-line and or tweaked history/world.

Anyway... now that I've gone off topic; I enjoyed reading this and look forward to more.

Watses

I love this story. Please update it!

I love this story. Please update it!

$24 in library fines for a dinner break? What'd you do? Have a million books checked out?

Anyway, hysterically funny story! I love it! I particularly liked the omake where Cloud was acting like Zack. So funny! I dearly hope you plan to update this story sometime because it's just too good to not be finished!

Awesome story! I don't really know anything about this category but I gave I a try since you wrote and I wasnt disappointed!

I really hope you continue this!

-Spy :)

Wow! Just reread your story and loved every chapter of it! But I'm actually fairly worried you may have dropped the story because I do not see it under "status of stories" on your profile...: