|Reviews for Playing hearts|
| Yukina-Tenma 5/13/13 . chapter 9
Update this story..IT'S AWESOME!
| Penshil 6/28/12 . chapter 9
I can't wait til the next chapter :)
| Lord Cow-Cow 6/21/12 . chapter 9
Hmm, no proof-reading today, either you've gotten better or I'm missing them. I'll assume you've improved.
The fact that my reviews usually mention spelling/grammar errors is a good thing, because it means I can't find any errors in the story or writing style. In fact you write English exceptionally well for it not being your native language. Better even than many who do speak it as their first language.
Anyway, as mean as it sounds, I'm glad Minko isn't enjoying dating Tohru even if she doesn't realize why yet.
I'm happy to be able to tell what Yuina's accent was without needing to be told (French right?).
Yuina/Minko are too cute together :) Can't wait to see Ohana's plan. Hopefully it helps and doesn't emotionally scar anyone.
| Tomlong75210 6/19/12 . chapter 9
Thanks for sharing this update! This is pretty good for English not being your first language, and your first language having a significantly different grammar structure.
Looking forward to the next installment!
| yuuki yami 6/19/12 . chapter 9
sweet it was is so in love with Yuina
| bcbb1d5d 6/18/12 . chapter 9
Ahoy! Thanks a lot for this chapter! I like the crancky Minko, the teaser Nako and that Yuina who puts nervious Minko.
Yeah, sooo good! I'm waiting for your new chapter because this story is just amazing!
| Lord Cow-Cow 5/2/12 . chapter 8
I sorta feel like a proof-reader. A few little errors.
1st, Right before Minko decided to go out with Tohru (grrr, he has to do something amazing to get on my good side.) you wrote "de3cision" instead of decision.
2nd, when Nako asked Yuina how she was, Yuina answered "like a shit." the "a" is unnecessary.
and 3rd, later she said "Maybe I agree to go out with Mikasa-kun" shouldn't it be "Maybe I should agree"
As you can tell, very small, unimportant mistakes that I've seen in even published novels but I always notice these things.
I can't say I "enjoyed" the chapter since most of it was Yuina feeling miserable. But it was important and well done.
And one last thing to say. FIGHT YUINA FIGHT!
| bcbb1d5d 5/1/12 . chapter 8
Woahh, woahh, woahh... I wanna know more!
Really, you made my day with this, sooooo interesssting!
Hahaha I love when you put accents
Ok, take care, and thanks! I love your story
| Tomlong75210 4/30/12 . chapter 8
In the context of the story, this chapter fits in nicely, but the chapter itself seems rushed. Some articles such as "the" are missing in a few places too... All the dialog or internal monologues could have been longer.
Anyway, I like what happened here. Minko didn't suddenly jump ship from her dream. However, I am looking forward to her introspection in the next chapters. Hopefully, she'll finally invest some real time in analyzing her feelings.
Looking forward to the next update!
| yuuki yami 4/30/12 . chapter 7
wahhh please update this soon! I 'm happy that you decided to continue it but please don't abandon this fic please!
| Tomlong75210 4/27/12 . chapter 7
Interesting... Minko is quite confused. I wonder what is going to happen during the confrontation with Tohru.
Thanks for the update!
| cleonaya 4/14/12 . chapter 7
Tohru x Ohana anyone plz!
| bcbb1d5d 3/31/12 . chapter 7
Awww Im so happy you didn't give up!
By the way I loved this chapter, it was my favorite and more longer! I'm so glad you did it cuz I really wanted something good to read
Thanks! I'll be waiting for the next
| Lord Cow-Cow 3/29/12 . chapter 7
Holy carp, that was quite the wait. I'm glad I noticed the update.
Hope your school stuff goes well :)
Anyway, as to the chapter.
I noticed a couple little mistakes. At some point you wrote "Ren always seemed to know things that Ren didn't." and I don't think that's what you meant to write.
They weren't very serious mistakes, so it's fine.
Even if Tohru feels bad about it, I refuse to forgive him.
If Nako had been kidnapped by aliens, that would be a crazy plot twist... but probably wouldn't fit the story.
The end of the chapter was so cute, I almost exploded. I haven't been reading any fanfiction lately, and had forgotten how much I enjoy it (although it's a pain to find one's I like) so thank you for that.
So, loved the chapter and love the story, I hope to see more.
And, lastly, an equally huge your welcome and virtual hug back.
| shamanic demonator 3/11/12 . chapter 6
juz finished watching the anime so came to find fics. This is nice but did u stopped updating?