Its a strange idea. Crazy. But would they really adopt a girl whose name is the same as their dead firstborns? never mind, I like it.

It has potential, but there are a lot of mistake. First of all, Daniel is older than Max, clearly. Secondly, it's way too short. We don't get to see what the family feel when Esther is hurt. We are given no sense of their emotions or grief. Thirdly, I'm sure Leena was in a different part of America prior to her being adopted by the Colemans.

If you want to talk, PM me. My username is the same as the one I am using here. xD x

there wasn't a story - sounded like random crap to me.