|Reviews for It's All On You|
| MeggaRobsten 2/2/12 . chapter 37
First of all, I'd like to say that this is my first serious review for a fanfic. I used to leave reviews like, "oh my god! this chapter is perfect! please please update now!" But since the author of IAOY is very encouraging and too awesome, I felt the desire to give a long and heartfelt review. (Please read this until the end, haha.) Oh and by the way, IAOY is my very first uncompleted fanfic that I read because I like to read fanfics that are finished and I don't have patience for awaiting updates. So I dedicated all these firsts to the author of "It's All On You". I hope I can add a lemon on top of my sweetened heartfelt tyllory intoxicated cake. ;)
Chapter 37 is like WOW. I mean, you BellaClary is one awesome author for always surprising me for every chapter. I always predict what's going to happen next, but like I said, you twist situations like there's no tomorrow. Seriously? Tell me what's your secret. Do you dream this story like SM did? Or you just happen to have the wildest imagination? Haha.
Bringing together Tyler and Mallory is a clever work of fiction already. Two fucked up persons in two different worlds. If I'll start a story like that, it'll turn out to be a fucked up story too. But... I can't say that your story isn't fucked up as well. Though your fucked up story is the better version. I've seen these two movies and I can say that their personalities are not that easy to be paired as a couple. You told us how Mallory and Tyler think of each other and I think the two side of story brought up it's imaginative-movielike version of fiction into this world. And in just that 37 chapters... so many things happened. It's like you're riding in a roller coaster, one day they're fighting, the next day they're fucking. But personally, I came to the point that I nearly threw my phone (it's where I'm reading btw, haha) away because sometimes I hated you for twisting things so badly that it hurts to see Tyler who unconditionally loves Mallory have his heart broken like that. And I almost came to the point that I'm loving Tyler more than I love THE Edward Cullen. hahaha.
And you know what people say... if you get irritated by the author of the story, it means you're loving the story but you just don't even know it... It's all on the author :))
Sometimes there are points in this story that I really can relate to. Mallory's thoughts mostly. She may be the prostitute and the abondoned but I think we have a lot in common. We both are... afraid of love. I hated when a single person comes into my life and make me love him and then leave and fucked up my life. But she's strong and courageous and maybe sometimes... idiot! Hahahaha. Yeah, she is. I mean, if I'm in her situation and I know that Max can kill the person that I love... why still come back to him? For the money? And I'd be honest to Tyler from the very start. She can't be independent forever... and I think I'm speaking for myself too. What the fuck? haha.
I've been reading fanfictions about Edward and Bella and some mature contents but sometimes it just gets boring. Always BDSM and sex but nothing is really happening. But this... is mad. Haha. The hate sex part is really intense and that is what I'm seeking for in a fanfic. My favorite part? It is when Mallory finally says he loves Tyler. The words are perfect, the situation is worst. And you, BellaClary is one fucked up author that is awesome and creative and dramatic. Haha.
So for my appreciation, I created a mixtape for this fanfiction. This may sound lame but IAOY has a special place in my fanfic heart now. I hope you'll find the time to listen to these songs because for me... the lyrics of these songs is like really created for this piece of story. :)
1. All of Me by Angus and Julia Stone - this song reminds me of when Tyler left Mallory alone in her apartment. The lyrics is down right emotional. Exactly what she's feeling about.
2. I'm Here Now by Motopony - well, it's all about Tyler falling inlove for Mallory for the first time, he kept repeating about her smile, it's in the song, it's just the song that makes me think of him.
3. I Will Not Be Broken by Ben Harper - reminds me of Mallory being kidnapped in Nick and Neil's place, she's in the dark place but she should not be broken, she can't be turned down so she stood up and fought till the end.
4. The Man Who Can't Be Moved by The Script - :"""") yikes! I'm fucking blushing! hahaha. Tyler is just the man who can't be moved. That's all. And I'm totally inlove with him and this song.
5. The Mess I Made by Parachute - ohmygod, this is like a part of the story that I can visualize in a tv with this song playing in the background, the scene where Tyler's putting all his clothes back to the duffel bag and all the time, Mallory's just staring at what she did.
6. Angels or Devils by Dishwalla - it is the song that's incidentally playing in my phone when I was reading Tyllory's making love scene... it's not too lovey-dovey but it sure does mixed up Tyllory's feelings for each other when they're making love. Too damn perfect lyrics. They see love, they see pain but it will take time to fight the demons between them :")
7. Get To You by James Morrison - now I'm getting all toooo sappy... this song reminds me of Tyler's persistent attitude towards Mallory. He'll get to her no matter what Mallory does or said to him. He's just too perfect you know? :")
8. Say (All I Need) by One Republic - for me this is the perfect song for Tyler and Mallory when they are in her bed and Tyler's going to say I love You to Mallory and then a part of him wants to hear from Mallory the... I love you too :") just say it Mallory! Damn it! haha.
9. Broken by Secondhand Serenade - and for my favorite part of the story, i'm giving it for secondhand serenade because mallory saying i love you to tyler when they're in the middle of breaking up is too damn hurtful for both of them. Is it broken? Can we work it out?
10. Life After You by Daughtry - there's no life after Tyler... there's no life after Mallory. Truthfully, I think they were both lifeless before they met each other. They are nothing without each other. So no matter what happens, Max/parents/money/problems... I think when one dies, the other one dies too and for that I think they complete each other.
Umm, so I hope you like my Tyllory mixtape. Honestly, I have a lot of songs in mind but these are my top ten songs. If you'd like to know more, here's my tweeter, it's MeggaRobsten. And forgive me for not having a fanfic account. It's just I'm not much for a reviewer kind of person... but I think I do now. :)
From your fan with chocolate tiramisu plus lemon on top,
MeggaRobsten (because like you, I'm an obsessed robstener too, haha)
| rjcarreno77 2/2/12 . chapter 37
Fantastic chapter. :)
I was totally on the edge of my seat while reading this chapter.
Max...GRRRRR! I'm so glad that Tyler killed him.
I am a little bit worried that Tyler could go to jail. But it was self defence, he was protecting himself and Mallory. So hopefully, nothing will come of that.
I've got such a big ass grin on myf face right now. So glad that Tyler told Mallory how much he loves her still. And Mallory telling Tyler that she loves him. :D
Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
| fanficgirl8 2/2/12 . chapter 37
perfect chapter! :)
| screwmekstew 2/2/12 . chapter 37
oh my gooood... I know Mallory is a mess right now but I'm so fucking happy :)
HE KILLED MAX AND I LOVE IT!
Thank you so much! I wanted this to happen since the beginning and now Tyler just shot him.
And they love each other and he won't leave her and awwwwwww...
I'm so fucking happy :)
Okay, I cried a lot - I admit - but now I'm just happy. I love you, I love Tyllory, I love this fanfiction - I LOVE IT!
You made my day :)
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
| AbsoFuckingLutely4everTwilight 2/2/12 . chapter 37
OMFG! thank god it wasn't Tyler! Yeah that motherf*cker is gone for good! I really hope Tyler and Mallory can sort out all their problems and be together happy!
And also let's hope the police doesn't get involved or smth cause Tyler could go to jail :/
This chapter was awesome! It was so sad (not the saddest though) and violent but finally t&m are together!
Pls update quickly! Can't wait for next chapter!
| cornnz 2/2/12 . chapter 37
I love it! I just hope Tyler doesn't get into too much trouble because even though her was defending Mallory it was, well, murder :\
Can't wait for the next update! This story has me so hooked!
| Cyaneifa123 2/2/12 . chapter 37
thank you for posting..really loved it! Thank God. Max is now dead... Hoping to see the next chapter :)
| heavenlyvixen 2/2/12 . chapter 37
I love this fic. It's just amazing. I eagerly await all updates. Can't wait for more.
| NJSilla 2/2/12 . chapter 37
IM FUCKING HAPPY MAX IS DEAD, I WONDER WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN TO TYLER NOW
BUT IT WAS IN SELF DEFENSE SO NOTHING CAN HAPPEN I THINK!
BUT I CANT I MEAN YOU SAW ME,
I FEEL NUMB RIGHT NOW I DONT KNOW WHAT ELSE
I LOVE THE CHAPTER SO FUCKING MUCH
BUT I CANT EVEN WRITE
I DONT FEEL LIKE WRITING RIGHT NOW
I FEEL TO MUCH!
IM SORRY I CANT WRITE MORE
I LOVE YOU, YOURE AMAZING
THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS!
| HockeyChick10 2/2/12 . chapter 37
Max got what he deserved! Let the lovefest of Mallory and Tyler begin anew :)
| NabStew 2/1/12 . chapter 37
IT WAS LIKE
YAY TYLER IS COMING
LET HER ALONE
RUN MALLORY RUN
IN THE CLOSET?
TYLER WHERE ARE YOU?
omg poor Mallory omg :'(
awww you got her, good, take her to a hospital
TYLER KILL HIM NOW
OMG WHAT ARE YOU DOING MALLORY
YOU ARE SO WEAK RIGHT NOW
YES TYLER GOT IT
OMG, TYLER CAN'T BE DEAD
OMG HE IS NOT
MAX IS DEAD
"I LOVE YOU SO FUCKING MUCH"
OMG, MY HEART
I LOVE SO FUCKING MUCH CLARY
I'VE NEVER HAD THIS AMOUNT OF FEELINGS FOR A FIC IN MY LIFE
OMG NEXT CHAPTER OMG
| Cori 2/1/12 . chapter 37
THIS WHOLE CHAPTER IS SO FUCKING INTENSE AND OVERWHELMING. LIKE I CANT EVEN DEAL WITH IT RIGHT NOW.
I WAS LIKE SHAKING WITH CHILLS AND HYPERVENTILATING WHEN MALLORY WAS GETTING BEAT BY MAX. JKDGJKHJFBJKHFDJKAHD
AND HER INNER THOUGHTS JUST COMPLETELY KILLED ME
TYLER AND MAX FIGHTING AND HER NOT BEING ABLE TO HELP BUT HER NEED TO HELP WAS SO ALIVE AND SO STRONG. I WAS LEGIT ON THE VERGE OF TEARS THE ENTIRE TIME.
AND THANK FUCKING GOD MAX IS FUCKING DEAD. HOPEFULLY DEADER THAN DEAD. HOPEFULLY IN HELL GETTING FUCKED IN THE ASS WITH A DILDO WITH NO MOTHERFUCKING LUBE. HALLELUJAH
| ANON 2/1/12 . chapter 37
i can sleep easy knowing they both love each other and they are gunna be ok and that max is dead, but the story still must have more to come! cant wait for the next update ! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU for updating so quikly!
| Charlie Belle 2/1/12 . chapter 37
MY FUCKING HEART
I KNEW IT! SINCE YOU GAVE US THE FUCKING PREVIEW I KNEW THAT IT WAS GOING TO BE MAX. I TOTALLY FORGOT ABOUT HIM, TILL YOU GAVE US THAT FUCKING PREVIEW. I AM SO FUCKING HAPPY THAT HE IS DEAD. YOU HAVE NO IDEA. I LOVE THAT HE IS DEAD. AND THE WAY YOU HAD HIM DIE.
I KNOW YOU SAID YOU WOULDN'T KILL MALLORY, OR TYLER. BUT I ACTUALLY GOT SCARED FOR A SECOND. I THOUGHT MALLORY GOT SHOT. WHEN YOU SAID SHE HIT THE FLOOR.
HOLY FUCKING SHIT
SO MUCH GOING ON.
I HAD TO STEP BACK AFTER A WHILE, BECAUSE THIS SHIT WAS INTENSE.
IM SO SAD THAT THIS IS ENDING
IM GOING TO FUCKING CRY.
I LOVE YOU
OMFG THIS FUCKING CHAPTER
| Stinepiigen 2/1/12 . chapter 36
Clary, I love you.
Oh my god.
One of my favorite chapters...wait..I can't have only one. I just love all of them. Every single one.
But this one...Woooooow!
When I read it, I felt completed. Relaxed, but at the same time excited.
Mallory, you're amazing. Look how much she's changed through the story. She would NEVER do what she does in this chapter before. She doesn't give up. I really, really love that fact about her. She fights for what she wants. And she wants Tyler more than anything. He is her life. Instead of giving up, she goes to his work. God, I'm so proud of her. And happy. She's just amazing. And the fact that she speaks to him without crying and stuff, but instead staying strong I love it.
And their conversation.. omg. I love it. It's really good. I really hate that Tyler pushes her away in the beginning and doesn't want her there. But they talk. And God, how I hated it when Mallory walked out of that door. It was weird seeing them like that. They both love eachother, but still it was very awkward when they saw each other. And then when I thought everything was lost, Tyler runs for her. He runs for her. Oh my god. I love him. I love that. That's so amazing. And him telling her, that he can't lose her.. he needs her too. I love it. God, you kill me. I can't wait for them to speak together again. Or just see what happends. It's too exciting. Please Clary, don't kill me. I know you can't just update now. And I'll give you time. I just wish I got another chapter like, right now.
Uh and Mallorys thought in the end. Perfect. Perfect ending of this chapter. Couldn't be better. I bet she will get him back. She'll fight for him untill her heart stops beating. She will. I know Mallory and she doesn't just give up. After everything they had, after she fell in love with him she won't. never.
Thank you. Love on you. I love this. 3