Lovely story!

Oh my dear freaking goodness. This is an incredible piece of writing. It kind of worms into you subtly and then at the end just... Wow. Blows up in the most wonderful way in your heart and leaves you gasping.

Wow.

This was a fabulous read. I love way you...well. Did everything really.

The only thing I can say is a few appearance things: FFN has this annoying habit of eliminating the space between a italicised word and it's following word. There were a few of those I noted throughout the fic.

But honestly. This was phenomenal.

okay, how have i NOT read one of your fics before? seriously, each of the three i've read has been incredible. great job yet again!

Oh goodness, that was beautiful. Probably the most beautiful Sherlock fanfiction I have read.

I've read this story a few times now, and I never get sick of it. I love the rhythm of it.

Englishmen skinny-dipping. Better stock up on aloe and ice cream.

Now that's official. I'm in love with your writing. God. *gotta calm down*

I usually don't leave reviews, but I saw that you only had a few and after reading this it is a mistake. That story was amazing. It was just so beautifully written. I am now going to go and read your other stories, because i'm at a lost of words to continue this review.

This is beautiful. Thank you so much.

wow. lovely.

Love it when Sherlock looks after John; it's such a twist from the show and it shows Sherlock's softer side, not to mention his uncertainties. And yes, nothing as sublime as swimming naked, the water like silk against your skin.

Love reading of our two heroes in happy times. Thank you :)

ohh. john's poor heart? what about my poor heart? because that was oddly sensual and heavy and beautiful.

Very sensual story. Thank you so much. There is nothing like a skinny-dipping scene to remind me of being a teenager...there's something so pure about swimming naked. I could see Sherlock suggesting this, too