this is an awesome story. i would've been interested to read what happens next, but this works well as a one shot. good job!

Keep it coming!You keep writing, I'll keep reading.

That was really funny. I especially liked the baseball stuff. It gave it a nice flavour. The only thing that was slightly unclear was quite what Clark saved Lois from. Great otherwise. More of the same please.

As usual, stunningly delivered. You're the master! I DO hope you're submitting some of these somehwere! Bravo!

this seem like a nice story to read... i'm starting to like it but i need more ch to see if i love this story... ( and i think i will) please let the next ch come soon..

I certainly hope you are not ending it here. Very interesting read. I like the older Lois Lane. More please?

Interesting, very interesting.

Hey, I like her! I didn't think she was that much older than Clark, but hey, whatever works :)