I used to love Moonlighting and only recently found out the 'official' ending - this makes a great epilogue! Thanks for writing it, the dialogue was spot on - well done!

Very colorful & original! Hope to see more! A new way of breaking the fourth wall! Kudos!

Now this is a very kiss- worthy ending! And this certainly leaves a beautiful image for all of us who hated to see this show end.

Your next Moonlighting piece will be posted when? :)

Oh I loved this so much - how imaginative and kooky! I'm all about the kooky :-) A proper season finale. Have you read and of the partners in crime stuff?Another alternative ending to season 5.

Charming and believable...I can just see David, especially, reacting this way once he realizes he's out from under the thumb of those dang writers. :)

Some good lines, too: "Really? I thought there'd be more steam." LOL!

I see you're new to ML fanfic...hope to see more from you!