The part where Soujiro explains his childhood went smoothly because you didn't have him talk in one long paragraph. I hate it when that happens since it would seem like he was calm and casual about something that painful. Great job with his emotional stuttering.

omg so cute...
the end was really good!

Wow! That was so good! ^.^ I love SoujirouMisao pairings! One thing though...The beginning was almost exactly like Whose Rainbows Never End by Deena...

Oh..My..God..This is one of the best Sou/Mis fics ever!! Its so good!! *stares in amazement* I can't believe you can write so good! Your an amazing author! You totally captured their personalities! Seriously, I was crying when Sou-chan was talking to Kamatari-san(sp?) and he jumped off that cliff!

I got so emotional!! *gets serious* I really was crying though. That's a hard thing to do too. I'm not saying that I'm heartless or anything!! Its just that it usually takes alot for me to cry. Like out of frustration (if someone REALLY ** me off), or if I read/watch a particularly emotional fic or movie. So you should be proud! Not many authors can make me cry! *smiles* It just shows how good and author you are!

Anyhoo...I really hope you write some more Sou/Mis fics. I think alot of people would be really happy if you did!!(Including me!! *grins*) *gives puppy dog face* Onegai? You have to! Someone with your talent shouldn't waste it!! But if you do decide to write more, I'll totally read it!

Though I might not review right away. (Thats only because I usually copy and paste fics so I don't use up the phone line. That way no one can yell at me for being on the internet. Mainly my sister. *grins*).

I hope you do write more! Till then I suppose!

Ja Ne!

~FadingHearts~

No lEMON?? TOO BAD
But this is still nice though...

Ah! ^-^ How kawaii! Good job! Wh00t!

Ja ne!

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Loved it!! And I think that I've read the fanfic that has supposedly inspired this fanfic..*thinks about it*
Hm...well, a sequel would be surely appreciated!! ^_^

Keep up the splendid work!! ^_^

deity of death

very sweet. i love soujiro's character and it's nice to have him find happiness
chorus of hopeless romantics: aw! Kawai!
sigh...

I am kind of freaked. Your fic is almost exactly alike to When Rainbows Never End by Deena...she/he has SouMis, the whole money thing for totaling Aoiya, and annoying ladies that get robbed and flirt with the heroes...plus the huge jerk of a husbund...why is it almost exactly alike??

What a great story! *tears streaming down face* I loved it! Really! You're such a good author... *sniff* Good story! Really really good story! And funny too... ha ha! Thank you for writting this story, I can tell that there was a lot of thought put into it. Thank you! I liked this fic a lot!

Sou/Misao . . . hm . . . I don't like romance very much, but I kind of like that. Sou-chan! I CALLED HIM SOU-CHAN BEFORE MISAO! (sticks out tongue)

Sarcastic Wolf: You started calling him Sou-chan about three days ago.

Ethelflaed: YOUR POINT?

umm... you do realize this is a thinly veiled rip-off of another sou/misao fic, right?

i mean, i cant be the ONLY one to see that...

I. Love. This. Soujirou/Misau are now one of my favrite couples on Rurouni Kenshin. You did a very good job on this. I'm definately gonna write my own fanfiction on S/M now! ^^

wow this is great i am impressed by how this story has gone great job

Hehe...gomen, the review I sent before was meant for the whole story, not just the first one...^^;;
Anyway, great story, I really wish I could write like you. I hope you write more Soujiro/Misao fics!