that was REALLY good. when i first started reading it, i didn't think that i would read the whole thing. but once i got started, it was to good to stop! keep writing!

to tell ya the truth, i wasnt gonna read this, but something made me stop and give it a chance. im very glad i did! WOW! nother one please? :) in any case, great story and thanks for writing it.

Good story. Can't wait for the continuation.

Yup, can't wait, cause it sounds like it'll be good.

Oh excellent story. Nice characterization you developed for Temie.

Oh. I love it. Please continue!