|Reviews for Somnus Frater Mortis Est|
| luxartisan 12/15/12 . chapter 5
Ok, so now I'm totally addicted to your writing. I bow to your immense talent. I hope you don't mind if I took mental notes so I can improve my own stuff. BTW...when are you going to be published? Or are you already? If not, get to it. I'll be checking out the rest of your cache tomorrow. Promise to let you know my take on your other stuff. I'm sure you've heard many accolades, but I know how delicious they are even a few years after the fact. Been there, done that. Would like to get there again in a new fandom. Be well. Angel
| The Original Dirtyangel 10/30/12 . chapter 5
So, I read this fic after watching the entire Blood series and feeling completely frustrated with the whole Saya/Haji situation. Thank you for writing this. It was exactly what I needed: Eloquent, erotic, and fulfilling.
| Esther Clemmens 5/19/12 . chapter 5
I LOVE this from beginning to end. The end had me laughing and laughing.
| Esther Clemmens 5/19/12 . chapter 4
You are truly truly gifted. I'm hanging on EVERY word!
| Esther Clemmens 5/19/12 . chapter 1
I have one word for this- BEAUTIFUL! I can feel the pain and confusion when you describe Saya. Just beautiful!
| sinemoras09 4/18/12 . chapter 5
HOW have I not reviewed this fic yet? I swear I've probably read this a million times, shame on me for not commenting!
You're seriously my go-to ficcer when I'm craving serious Saya/Haji, and this is probably one of my favorite stories of yours to date. The quiet moment in the carnival, when Haji slips his fingers inside her (!) is pretty much the hottest thing ever, because it's HAJI and for once he's letting himself go a little. His concern for her in the last chapter was really touching and well-written, because they're both learning and Haji's trying so hard to be gentle, even if he's just as nervous and inexperienced as she is.
I think my favorite part though was when Saya was telling Haji that she loved him, and how he kissed her so chastely and sweetly afterwards. It makes my soppy shippy heart happy :)
| Anonymousness 12/18/11 . chapter 5
gorgeously done! Lovely lemon as always, and a great story overall. While not heavy on long, multiarched plot, the fabulousness of your prose amply makes up for anything potentially wanting - which means it's perfect! Well done!
| Anonymousness 12/18/11 . chapter 4
more awesome action... and sounds like there'll be a different kind of action in the next chapter :)
| Anonymousness 12/18/11 . chapter 3
god, i'd almost forgot how awesomely you write action!
| Anonymousness 12/18/11 . chapter 2
they are so cute together... and that's not an easy thing for that pair without putting them out of character!
| Anonymousness 12/18/11 . chapter 1
excellent as always! Its always such a joy to read your work - Looking forward to one of your fabulous lemons ;)
| xBDMx 12/6/11 . chapter 5
This is very well written. Even the characters are captured perfectly (wich is the easiest thing to miss in FanFic). The names you picked out for the twins are a lot more Asian influenced than ones I had picked out. I would have personally liked you to bring in some of the othr characters (Kaori for example), or had at least put in some explanation for why they might not be in Okinawa anymore. Then again, I'm all for the side details that can get annoying. :)
| shole 12/6/11 . chapter 1
So...! Good! Was rereading Unvollendete when I checked your profile! *squeeee* May I ever have the chance to graze my lips on your toes as you walk pass my bowed figure!
*sighs* You're so dreamy when you describe Haji and Saya.
P.S: Yes, I'm sorry, I'm such an a$$, I did not even leave a review for Unvollendete. If I did, I had to go back to chapter 1 and write all the nice things about it till the last chapter!
| gillian32 11/6/11 . chapter 5
sinemoras09 recommended you when I was looking for authors who write good Haji/Saya fics, and I must say, she was definitely on the money! This was wonderful! I really enjoyed this fic. Thank you for sharing!
| Wolfen Kahlon 11/6/11 . chapter 5
This fic was excellent. You've got a good mix of feelings here, there's dark and light and melancholy and lust and love and comedy and it all blends so well and feels so real.
You do well with the characters taking minor roles in this as well. Kai comes across strongly, as do Kami and Sora... er, sorry, Sora and Kami.
Also kudos for letting Saya kick some ass without her usual weapon.