This is legitimately one of my favorite fanfics ever! Probably the most epic 'sequel' I've ever read too! I love the long chapters and the heavy-loads of fluff and adorableness! It's the best thing to read right now for me, anyways x3. Plus I just adore the Jack and Sally pairing, and I love the movie. I hope you both will write a ton more, it's too good to stop! I'm looking forward to whatever updates you two can conjure up :3! Seriously awesome story, hands down!

Love your story so good! Your a great writer!

Awkward beginning there but sweet ending

8D Oh my gosh! This chapter was extremely sweet, awwww! Who am I kidding? All the chapters are extremely sweet! This story is very heartwarming and FLUFFY! I boy do I love fluffiness. XD Coming home from school and this story is the first thing I read! You both really write this couple so perfectly. This story is very amazing; I hope that is known. This story deserves all the love it gets. It's very beautiful! I can't wait for what you two have in store for the next chapter! I crave long reads like this. These updates make my day! Jack and Sally for eternity! Haha I know I sound so silly but this story is making me crazy-happy.

I love this story! As an avid Jack/Sally shipper I am just squealing in delight in the midst of all this juicy romance. Keep it up! :)

YAY You finished another chapter! This makes me so happy :'D

Oh, this was just to sweet! I must have more, update soon please? :)

:'C

Are you still going to finish this?

Wow, another long and awesome chapter! But I probably shouldn't say awesome... more like good. Four out of five stars for typos.

Since this story has quite a few more chapters for me to read, I'll do what I usually do. I reviewed this chapter and the first, but now I'll pretty much be completely mum and read until the last chapter, where I'll give a general review on the story overall.

Well, there are a few mistakes with conventions (punctuation, mostly) but I loved the chapter and it was so long! I hope all the other chapters are as long as this one. :)

Anyway, overall I really like it so far.

:D! That was AMAZINGZCFFLUUGBHTEVWKNQD! *passes out*

I've read this chappie about four times now, and each time I read it I find myself loving it more and more 83! I'll just point out before I forget- there are a few typing errors, but it's not significant to anything and I just wanted you two to know that :).

Anyways...*giant dreamy sigh* WOW. This chapter was just full of fun! It was so enjoyable to read, I completely LOVE how you both write things- the dialogue, the characters, everything! I'm addicted to both of your writing styles and mannerisms in this. I love the way this is written, plain and simple.

I wish we could have heard more about the honeymoon, but I am indeed grateful for what you both put in for it in the beginning. It sounds utterly awesome...that's really great they got to go to all of those places and explore! And the Transylvania adventure- wicked awesome. ;D They would totally just blend into the haunted castle and be able to reside there for their quite steamy evenings...x3! And I love how they just went wherever they wanted...Jack was so sweet to immediately answer to Sally's daydreams for Italy...so sweet! I can just picture the two of them having the time of their lives just roaming freely in all of these places. (They probably stuck out like a sore thumb though! XD)

Sally, you're just awesome D. That as very brave of her to go to the doctor, her own creator and father in a sense, to search for answers. I think it's unbelievably sweet that she wants kids with Jack this much, that she's willing to do whatever it takes, being as committed as she is. She's really so very admirable...3

The doctor was hilarious. xD! But it was all still heartwarming all the same.

Sooooo...? Is Dr. Fink going to make a new pet now? Makes me excited! Him and Jewel are hilariously adorable. xD! They would make such amusing grandparent figures to Jack and Sally's children.

Poor Jack D8! Missing his Sally so much when she's gone...which is understandable I guess, since they are so very in love and married now too...awwwwww !

I seriously adore how connected and close the two are, just loving to be with each other and savoring such a sweet love they have. 83 They are the just the cutest newlyweds ever! I love me some married Jack and Sally x3!

And boy, are those two passionate! XD They're so adorable. Really really really really really adorable. And the clothes just fly right off of them! *goes into a giggle-fit* Again, I just love their adorableness and how in love they are and how sweet and elusive they are to each other, and so doting and caring.

Plus, I extremely love how things are worded in this. Like how Jack says some things...and how Sally says some things...*spazzes* XD They are too cute for their own good.

I love their innocent little suggestiveness they seem to have with each other at the sweetest of times...and how open they are together; and I really love how Jack reacted to the news Sally gave to him about her visit with the doctor. And Sally showered him with love...AWWW! I was just gushing at the way it was all written out. DAMN THEY ARE SWEET. *passes out again*

I love how nostalgic they are sometimes...and even reminiscing the first time they made love. I'm sorry, but I am in crazy adoration how sweet these two are. Don't ever stop writing them so sweetly! I just ADORE it! ,3

I know I'm saying 'I love' this and that a lot...but I can't help it! So I'll just keep going with it xD. I love their steamy passionate moments; not ashamed to admit that! (Sexy roleplays for the win! XD) Again, it's written out geniously so what's not to love? They are so very close and in love and really...you can't stop love so you might as well let it happen! And with this couple what could be more natural?

I love the idea of Jack and Sally having kids, which I guess is obvious enough by now. It's great that there's the option of them being created by the doctor, yes...but I really REALLY want to read Jack and Sally going about this naturally, and I badly want to read all of the moments throughout Sally's pregnancy...and just how it goes for them. I want them to be that close to their child, and enjoy the fun roller-coaster of pregnancies x,3. And even if they do end up having their children created, I'll be okay with that too...since all I know in the end for sure is that Jack and Sally will make the best. parents. ever! 8D! I just LOVE the idea of it! 8')

Anyways, sorry for my craziness and annoying-ness! This chapter was one of the best! Every chapter I just get more and more addicted to these too, and it's so much fun and really enjoyable to read. I want them to be together forever so much...;w; ...Hopefully they don't have children for a while, since I'm really starting to love these romantic intimate moments you both are so generously dishing out for the two...x3! But write whatever it is you want, I'm more than sure I'll love it all anyways! These two have such a great marriage and I love seeing them alongside each other as King and Queen. *cheers enthusiastically* I can't wait to read what you two have in store for them next because every chapter is just full of surprises!

I haven't smiled this big all day! This story rocks. I know that sounds immature to say, but I really don't know what else to say right now other than it simply rocks. It just does, okay? 8,D!

-a random smiley unnamed TNBC and enthusiastic Jally fan!

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Oh my god. So amazed. So amazed. I am so amazed right now. I cannot even believe it.

I cannot even correctly put into words how much I love and adore this chapter. It is just impossible. This chapter is one of the first things I got to read in 2012 (I know it updated on Christmas but I was out of town for a while very preoccupied) and you both will never believe how happy reading this made me. I (I know others have too) have been looking very very very forward to this chapter and all that it holds and at reading it all I can say right now is that the chapter did NOT disappoint in the slightest and...it went way higher than any expectations I could have ever come up with 'D.

The wedding was beautiful. Truly and completely. I am going to re-read it all like a mad-woman, it was THAT good. I can honestly say it was one of the best-written weddings I've ever read on this website. (And mind you I go from fandom to fandom under various names all going like 'A random unnamed 'blank' fan'- filling in the blank for the initials of whatever kind of fanfic I'm reading. Also, I've read my fair share of weddings for my scattered OTPs before (these two here probably my top OTP in present times) and not all of them live up to what they should be and what I hope for them to be. But this exceeded all expectations I might have made and I felt SO joyous! The wedding was so charming and in-character and it flowed very well and I loved everything about it! The moments were unforgettable! *sniffle*

And then when the spectacular wedding was over and the renowned bride and groom made their way home, I was admittedly a little nervous and I didn't really know what to expect. But I really liked how they went at everything...Jack was absolutely adorable completing the thresholds xD. I liked how they were out in the living room just talking for some time and getting relaxed, which I think was a great add and it really helped the situation for them. And Jack was so sweet to decorate a little x3. He was so caring! And the *giggle* undressing scene in the bedroom was SO ADORABLE. Sally needed help getting out of her lovely wedding gown and Jack was so flustered that the poor lad fell over XDXDXD. But I thought it was a cute moment when he was unlacing the back of her dress and she had to hold it up for him so it didn't fall off and Jack was such a gentleman about everything, which I love completely! I was blushing so much though but it was all so cute to read!

Both of you two are just so admirable in your writing. This proved tenfold in the bedroom scene. Everything about it was sweet and wonderful and in-character and I cannot even fathom how much I seriously appreciate you two writing this all in such a way. I HATE it when there's a beautiful romance story that is very touching and admirable...and then when the couple of the story makes love EVERYTHING gets ruined because the author turned all of the beautiful and deep story into a porno JUST. LIKE. THAT. So suddenly. I despise that. I've had my share of disappointing stories in that context... I am not on this website to read perverted full-blown out-of-context sex scenes that ruin the beauty of making love and therefore ruin the story.

The scenes of the two making love here were definitely highly built-up in this story, but in the way it should be and nothing was ruined and it was nice to read all that build-up. And here it was written so beautifully. I was in awe because now the two are FINALLY married and can be as close as possible and it was all presented so nicely and it progressed amazingly and it was approached at spectacularly! You see, I am usually not one to review sex scenes because I fear that I'll come across as immature/perverted when writing about it. Instead, I'm happy to say things about it all here because it really was truly beautiful and I can actually deeply appreciate it for all that it was. This is what I want to read, and what I wish more stories would be like. I don't mind graphic-ness at all if it's kept in context and in-character, but I'm fine either way. As long as the situation is presented clearly enough so the readers can get the gist of what's happening in the chapter. And that's exactly what you two did here. I could not be more pleased with it all! I'm so happy Jack and Sally could share such an experience together and be with each other and enjoy it all like we hoped they would. Everything else included along with lovemaking, I hope the two can have a truly spectacular married life together. They both deserve it and the both are simply meant to be so I know that you two will write no less than the best for them in everything, so that makes me very grateful to be a reader of this fanfic.

I love this chapter. Again, more than I could ever say. Jack and Sally are amazing, as individuals and together, MARRIED together, which is like one of the best thoughts I can ever imagine in my mind. The two being married. PERFECT.

I am too happy to function anymore x'3. Thus ends my review, which I hope was senseful and thorough enough and hopefully I said enough to show my gratitude to this all.

Much love,

A random unnamed TNBC fan

I can only imagine how many times they'll do it during the honeymoon...XD.

The Wedding was so tender and sweet. All of the scenes where you'd write about Jack and Sally's romance are grand, but this just seemed to take the cake. Of course, it's their wedding-it would have to!

Thanks for not being too explicit with the sex parts-I could never properly stomach reading those kinds of subjects...ahem.

Great job once again. :D

Merry Belated Christmas! :)

Im sorry I havent reviewed since, well, forever xD (hectic life, Christmas madness, you know). But, yes, Im glad it finally happened. :3 Its just..so fluffy! The beautiful vows..and the love making..it wasnt inappropiate, but just sweet! I was LMAOing at some of the moments, though.

Overall, its really sweet. Keep it up!;)

Oh, a few of the dates or something got in there..along with the last 2 paragraphs of the scene before morning being repeated twice. But, not a big deal. :3

Limewolf

A really really lovely, touching, and very sweet chapter. It's quite natural what they are going through and I'm so very grateful for how kind and understanding they are towards each other about all of this. Jack is inhumanly awesome, just saying XD. (pun intended)

I love all of the moments between them- the passionate and the sweet. I hope they have all good moments in their marriage no matter what comes to happen and I just know they'll be happy together forever. This chapter made me quite emotional for some reason (at the ending mostly) and I just feel so happy for the two and how far they've come and what's in store for them for the future. I know that the first time in making love for them will be beautiful and better than they ever could've imagined and they deserve that in their relationship. I know that they will still have plenty of sweet, mellow, and tender moments of being in togetherness too. There is a lot to come from marriage for a couple and I'm looking forward to it all for them. Their children are going to be so freaking lucky to have beings as amazing as them for parents!

I just feel so overflowed with emotions and happiness in reading this, thank you to you both! Congratulations to Jack and Sally; I'm ecstaticly excited for their wedding! It will be so amazing!

You both are so awesome for writing all of this loveliness. Seriously!

-a random happy girl. so very happy. who is very eager for a certain wedding. the end.