| Reviews for Tortured |
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kat.of.the.rina 10/13/12 . chapter 14Ur a really good writer! hope to read another one of ur stories |
V 9/8/12 . chapter 14 okay just... no. yeah, just no. enough said. -_- |
AgentDoubleONight 6/27/12 . chapter 14All I will say is this: This last chapter left a bittersweet feeling in me. |
AgentDoubleONight 6/27/12 . chapter 13OH MY GOD OH MY FUCKING GOD! I had to stop reading at the 'Cam froze'. I stopped out of fear, horror, shock, terror, and prayed the the ending I thought was gonna happen didn't happen...But IT HAPPENED! I might as well be crying since I'm so close to crying. You might as well have killed me! I could just...die! I'm so mad at you! |
AgentDoubleONight 6/26/12 . chapter 12Okay, I was like fine reading until 'It tore me apart inside, but I knew who I wanted. Who I needed.' I was like "Oh my god! Please be Cam!" And at teh second 'I took a step forward' I had to look away for a second. And at 'I turned to my right to face...' I stopped reading and looked away, praying for Cam, hoping to see his name. And so, my heart sank when I read '-bright violet eyes-' I almost started cussing and crying for it! I hate you so much right now... T.T That's me. T.T T.T T.T |
AgentDoubleONight 6/12/12 . chapter 11From the point where Cam arrived at Luce's houes I was like 'Oh my god oh my god oh my god' over and over and I but my nail a lot and at the end I was like 'WTH? Why must you end there!' |
AgentDoubleONight 5/29/12 . chapter 10I am reading this at school and let me say my heart is broken. Im sittin at a tavle surrounded by classmates so I had to bite my lip to keep from getting teary-eyed. I dont know why bit i wanted to cry and I would scream if i wasnt at school. PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! |
AgentDoubleONight 5/27/12 . chapter 9My heart just broke into a billion pieces :'( ...Luce's words hurt ME as much as they hurt CAM! Why Luce? Why! I could cry since she'd going back to Daniel...AND IT MEANS SHE'S LEAVING CAM! *dramatic teardrop!* UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! |
AgentDoubleONight 5/11/12 . chapter 8"-You hurt her, and now you lost her.-" I almost squealed when I read that. Buhbye Daniel, your car is right over here Uhold open car door* just hop in and GET AWAY! Oh, and have a nice life WITHOUT Luce! AWESOME CHAPTER! |
AgentDoubleONight 5/7/12 . chapter 7Daniel sounds a bit like an adic who hasnt had his drugs in a while...hilarious! Cam was so sweet even when Luce said she'd thought he was Daniel. And Im some how being patient for CamXLuce, yay! Update as soon as you cam please! |
AgentDoubleONight 5/5/12 . chapter 6Such loveliness suring the LuceXCam at the lake. But how could she have ever, for a second, thought it was Daniel? And why on earth did she scream? Update as soon as you get the chance, please! |
AgentDoubleONight 4/11/12 . chapter 5YEAH! Cam and Luce have interest in eachother! BEAT THAT YOU STUPID DANIEL! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE let Cam get Luce and PLEASE update soon! |
AgentDoubleONight 4/9/12 . chapter 4Great stroy so far! Though, I feel bad for Luce and am mad at Daniel for being an idiot, but that's nothing new. PLEASE update soon! Cuz I want to see what happens when Luce see's Daniel and Arriane's kiss...Ooo! She can go running to Cam for comfort! |
xXSpiritedWolfxX 1/21/12 . chapter 1awesome! two amazing books in one(: |
AgentDoubleONight 1/21/12 . chapter 2Hehe...I can imagine several things happening when Luce sees Daniel and Arriane's kiss ranging from running off crying and heartbroken to Daniel's death...I'd perfer the later. PLEASE Update Soon! |