I have read this story once in another site. I really love it. I'm happy to read it again. :')

It's almost like a seaquel to the other one, I like this very much.

great fic! i love ur idea of passing the rune around to extend life...i can't imagine gremio passing away though...just hope kasumi can be there

absolutely wonderful. it was beautiful.

I: Hey! Wow! That was superb! Excellent! I read the fic with my friend via phone, yes, I dictated everything to her: top to bottom. But I don't care if my ears are very sore now (I have been reading her fanfics the whole night, it's 11:30pm now) it's all worth it! I love the story! Okay, here's my friend.

G: The story was really really nice! It was also very interesting.

I: Yes it was! Oh I'd love to see the continuation! Please write more!

G: Yes! I'd like to hear more.

I: Oh no, does that mean another long phone call? XD It's ok. The fic's very good anyway.

G: Hey it was your idea!

I: Ya, that's why I said it was ok! I love reading you fanfics anyway.

G: Anyway, The start was so sad, but the end was suprisingly happy! It's really something.

;.;... wow great story, I loved it! Keep writing!

So...sweet. I'm all full of sappy, sweet good-feeling. You know that feeling? Kinda like when Gremio came back? Yeah, that feeling. This was a very, very good ficcie. It was sweet, but at the same time, it was sad. I think you got these two perfectly, which is difficult in the way of McDohl. But, I shall tell you, thank you for this fic, it was very sweet, and well written. I enjoyed it immensely.

That's kinda cute... *sniffles* never would have thought that could happen, but it's a heartwarming possibility

Sweet like candy. Very well written!

Now THIS is a fanfic. Very nicely done.

Beautifully written! I'm very impressed.

I really like the way you wrote Gremio's perspective. It's exactly as I would imagine him to be.

Excellent story! _