|Reviews for Sins of the Fathers|
| TatterdemalionDandelion 4/4/13 . chapter 7
Beautifully characterized and delightful story. Thank you for a wonderful read.
| tam418 11/25/12 . chapter 7
I really love this! you are awesome :D I can't really express just how much I love this!
| Changedaccountssss 11/4/12 . chapter 7
Good story, though I really don't agree with Rose and James dating, their cousins. I wouldn't even date my cousin if he was the last man on earth, it's like incest. It's gross. I love that Scorpius and Albus were dating but and obviously Draco and Harry have something going on as well, but Rose and James? ew.
| Changedaccountssss 11/4/12 . chapter 5
Why would she want to go out with James? well, for one it would be WRONG and SICK. They're cousins.
| Draco mudiliar 10/10/12 . chapter 7
hahaaa! a wonderful story. but how come only scrop can talk to hogwarts?...
good job with pen!
| bubblesfreak 9/27/12 . chapter 7
I quite enjoyed reading this. Its cute and funny.
| AnimeOtaku4444 9/3/12 . chapter 7
I really loved this story! The plot, the characterization, all of it. I just took a look at your profile page, and I've decided to make my way through all of your other stories too. Your writing style is very different from most, so it takes some getting used to, but you had me laughing hysterically so many times, the people around me were looking at me as though I should be institutionalized. Thank you so much for that, I really needed the laughter. :-)
| Natural Seoul 3/4/12 . chapter 7
Splendid! I don't generally read second gen stories, but because I enjoy your writing so much, I gave it a chance. I am glad I did. I think you've kept the spirit of the world right. I would like to know more about the Scorpius-Hogwarts bond, so I hope you explain that in another story soon.
Also, I strongly encourage you to write humour-smut for my own satisfaction.
| Lori94 12/9/11 . chapter 7
Wow! All those ups and downs! Loved it!
| Kyna Marioc 12/7/11 . chapter 7
I adored this! Loved the characters and loved the story! Was there a hint of Drarry there at the end, or do I just ship them too hard? Brilliant story! Thanks for sharing it with us!
| Arithmancy Master 11/19/11 . chapter 7
Good story, I look forward to the sequel.
| Arithmancy Master 11/19/11 . chapter 6
Seems that Ron and Draco no longer maintain the schoolboy animosity, based on his comment 'Your dad's alright'. I presume that it was still there at the start of the story based on how Ron kept looking at Scorpius at the dinner table.
Harry turning muggles into hedgehogs - very amusing but possibly not in accordance with either auror rules or the statute of secrecy.
What an idiotic way for Scorpius to travel to Wiltshire. Other possibilities - If going to get the Knight bus, then why not do it from Hogsmeade rather after a bus and plane journey - it would be much cheaper. Better still, why not floo to Ryan's aunt's place then get her to apparate him there as close as possible. How about going to a teacher such as Flitwick and asking them to verify/help. Made me suspect that Ryan was not trustworthy, but it seems that my suspicions were ill founded.
| Arithmancy Master 11/19/11 . chapter 5
I'm sure the Grey Lady's words of advice were well meaning, but they seemed to have scared Scorpius a bit too much, leaving him unwilling to act on what he seems to know. He and Albus are both tiptoeing around the problem by encouraging each other to take girlfriends.
| Arithmancy Master 11/19/11 . chapter 4
Sad but inevitable that parents would split up - well it was for me, who has the benefit of knowing about the sequel.
Scorpius seems so interested in the war and what really happened - I wonder if he will do something to try to really set the record straight. He named the people who had contributed to the official history - maybe these were not the right people and he needs Harry for the final battle info and possibly his father, to give information on what happened behind death eater doors.
| Arithmancy Master 11/19/11 . chapter 3
I can understand why someone would attack Scorpius - based on the false history recently released. What I can't understand is why Harry was there in the infirmary - it wasn't his child that was ill. Maybe something to do with being at work when the news came and coming for moral support? Maybe to do with the fact that his son had refused to attend lessons? Or maybe something more direct - having to do something to affect Scorpius' recovery. Oh well, three probably wrong guesses is about my limit for one chapter.