This is highly interesting, and I am finding many parts of this story to be emotionally gripping and still retain a bit of light-hearted humor. I will be looking forward to the next chapter. Well done!

Glad to see you're still writing.

I was so excited to see that you updated! And then...
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Repede!
My mind was screaming, 'NOT THE DOG!' for a good portion of the chapter. I can't believe that I fell for it. Thank goodness for that last line haha.

I'm always impressed by fight scenes and you've written it well. :D

Does this mean you've found inspiration?!

D:

Dead to me, you are.

FINALLY! It's was about time! Sad, when you told me about your idea, i never expected to you to kill Repede... I was a fan of him TWT Still, so sad, and so perfect

To the person playing this boss battle: lern2Yuri

A bit of Glory, Guard and Backstep would make this battle so much less infuriating. Sprinkle in some Overdrive for taste, SDS (your mileage may vary) and Final Gale ad infinitum.

As hard as I try to think otherwise, I cannot see this boss battle as anything but one endless bout of Cutscene Incompetence. But then, the only times Vesperia was ever really difficult was when the game demanded that you lose horribly.

Well just read through most of your older works and this again and I never seem to get tired of it, it is really that good so great work by a great author and I hope you continue to write, you have real talent when it comes to humor and romance stories.

GAH! Nooooo! Tell me you're not going to kill Raven off. After that bonding in the previous chapter, I'm feeling a little mushy towards him.

And you call this boring? You must have been through some pretty exciting things for this to be dull. I mean, you've even left us with a (in my opinion) suspenseful cliffhanger there.

Anyway, I love this story :) And I hope you find inspiration soon!

[quote]In the spirit conversion, we used up four Apathea, and Alexei took the rest from any remaining Entelexia when he brought Zaude back above the surface. Judith's Ba'ul is the last known Entelexia remainin[/quote]

As I recall, the Krityan's floating city, Myorzo (I think), resides on the back of an Entelexia. As it is still floating (one assumes) after Tarqaron, that Entelexia would appear to be alive and well.

Thats why been Reckless is something far too stupid, now They lose their best weapon.

damn that dream! TT

omg that hug rita gave is soo cutee
if i were yuri i would hug her back tightly! w

damn this is excellent :D
the story is really canon and characters are match perfectly!

loved this story, wondering when you're gonna update it.

Oh please continue this! i'm dying to know whats gonna happen to the old man! DD: