Whatever u do dont put padme in or get rid of ahsoka

damn! Anakin got bitched slapped! LOL Ahsoka is right though, she has sacrificed a lot in her life and Anakin doesn't appreciate it. that's not like Anakin then again it is Anakin, so yeah. Anyway it's getting intense! i can't wait for the next chapter! great story!

Ass's I really like it please continue

Love it!

Please write another chapter and make it long! Good job!

Awesome story keep up the good work UPDATE SOOOON! :) :)

I don't know when this was made but u mist add more and please I am a huge Rexsoka fan so please encounter that in it 2

Anakin killed Sand People or"Tusken Raiders" not ewoks.

Wow i love your story! Ps im watching the clone wars too! :)

I think that the son should take control of ashoka and make her kill somone of importance making ani and padme team up against her. Padme and ani end up getting bak together as ashoka is comforted by obi wan. Then ashoka ends up killing padme in a freak speeder accident causing ani to hate ashoka. Ani ignores ashoka as she tries to apologize but only listens when his mom come in his dreams and tells him to "man up" and love ashoka agian. While ani ignores ashoka obi tun ashoka bak to a togurata. Seeing this ani sees his padwan and the love of his life. Ani and ashoka continue training and the end is up to you! PLEASE CONSIDER IT AND THANK YOU FOR ALL YOUR HARD WORK ON THE SERIES ! p.s. im 12 so sorry if my ideas r crappy.

I suggest change how Anakin falls to the dark side. The canon story should go the same way except with Ahsoka instead of Padme. Anakin should still have nightmares of her death and such.

i LOVE it 11111:)

love this make more plz

needs more chapters

Great chapter so far. Update soon!