|Reviews for The Longest Road|
| phantom frost 2/17/13 . chapter 3
please update this soon
| Jarick 12/12/12 . chapter 3
Can't wait for more. really! I can't wait. But so far the story's been good. Is it gonna end up being NarutoxHawkexBethany? :3 Please say yes!
| Deadzepplin 2/23/12 . chapter 3
Needs more sage mode
| Blackholelord 1/15/12 . chapter 3
Actually a good story, keep up the good work.
| Knives91 1/11/12 . chapter 3
Now this... this is good for the soul. So much adorable overprotectiveness.
An excellent piece of work. Please continue!
| Elemental Dragon Swordman 1/7/12 . chapter 3
Great chapter and keep up the good work!
| god of all 1/6/12 . chapter 3
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon
| SomeGuy300 1/5/12 . chapter 3
Oh ho man Neon! Your seriously know how to do things right in these stories! I love it x3 keep up this work!
| Jetstream S 1/5/12 . chapter 3
I noticed the amount of stories you've written/are writing. And then, I read "Sorry if it is short, as I am striving to update all of my stories as best as I can!".
You are very brave, good sir.
| nogard265 1/5/12 . chapter 3
I feel like you rushed this.
For example, you have a rather odd sentence fragment: "There standing in the shadows, a"
Its a bit randomly there.
Also, this is a small error but still maybe important
"many silverlite daggers" and "silverlite armor".
Its "silverite" not "silverlite."
| Skelo 1/5/12 . chapter 3
love it but come on! Longer please! And lemons soon please!
| grimangel163 1/5/12 . chapter 3
| MrPowell 11/8/11 . chapter 2
Hmmm I'd prefer to see a little more of the Naruto we know... What happened to the ninja?
Does a jinchuriki actually count as an abomination?
Most of all, this needs more before I can decide on the story as a whole. Interesting premise but not enough story.
| Diaconsecond 9/15/11 . chapter 2
Wonderful story so far, I really hope you keep working on this one
| god of all 9/11/11 . chapter 2
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.