This is so ridiculously sad...I hate stories that can almost make me cry...

Wow. I love your story and I really wish you would continue it. The details are so vivid, I feel like I'm watching a movie in my head. But, more importantly, the whole idea is intresting. It's dark, disturbing, yet makes sense in the Psychonaut world.

Great job and happy new year.

This is weird, but interesting. I'd be interested if you kept this going. :-)