Oh man. This was awesome. I can hear Johnny Depp's voice so easily in my head.

Great writing!

Okay...

First word that comes to mind: Ouch.

Second word: Ouch.

Third: Ouch.

Regardless, this was REALLY good, and really sad. I don't normally like sad stories, but the fact I had to shake myself back into reality once I finished this one I take as a sign of excellent authorship. I intend to read more from you in the future.

"End of line."

Sincerely yours,

J.

Neato