This is lovely. Wish there was more.

I can't wait until the next update! This is a great story and you are a wonderful author!

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE.
THIS IS JUST-
SMASHING.

I know its been a while but I would love to see an update to this. It's beautifully written, and has had me hooked since the first sentence. I love how you incorporate many of the details of the film, like Jonah's ghost in the television set and the mirror. It adds so much reasoning behind all the ghostly manifestations Matt goes through in the film as well. Plus I ship Matt/Jonah hard, it's pratically canon when you look at it. If only the way you tell it could have been incorporated in the film.

Awesome story! I love all of the details and everything. This is probably a long shot, but I hope you continue this story one day! ;)

This is really, really good. The describes, the mood you've managed to create - it's fantastic. I am drawn in more and more with every segment. Please say you'll update this? c:

This is GREAT! I (AKA super-critic)can't even find any real errors keep writing when you can!

WTF and i love how he doesnt out any thought on how THEIR GGAAAYYYYY! jonah is noooott! wtf this wus my fav untill u turned em gay! i got nothin againtst em but reeeaalllyy

This is fantastic! I love how you approach the writing and the idea. Can't wait for more! This is satisfying so many cravings I had for this pair. C:

Well written story. I'll be waiting for an update :)

You have made me fall in love with this fandom. And Matt/Jonah. I really enjoyed this. It is unique the way you showed Jonah's POV throughout the chapter. Anyway, thanks for the great read. Keep writing.

OMG Ok, first of all, I love it! I'm so loving it and there is more to come, right? I love that your changing the movie a bit. They weren't quite as daring as they should have been;)Matt/Jonah just makes sense. Second of all, I'm SO HAPPY to see an active story in this fandom! I just "discovered" (for lack of a better description) it and was so excited to see what people had come up with for it. Surprised and saddened to see it's virtually inactive and-le gasp-hetero! You have my full attention and I hope there is more to this story because I'm REALLY happy with it and I love it!

That was such a cute chapter! D: you don't know how excited I was to see this story updated. I understand the homework, I barely have time to read stories anymore, but I hope you keep it up! Can't wait for another chapter. :)

*fangirl scream* yay! Love it!

I hope you continue writing this! :D There's not nearly enough of this couple around here and this is one of my favorites!