|Reviews for Corin|
| spectre4hire 3/14/13 . chapter 47
Always happy to see an update for this story.
Pleased to see a set date/time frame for the wedding/coronation.
As you know, I'm looking forward to how you will write it.
Thanks for sharing,
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| mille libri 3/13/13 . chapter 47
Nerissa certainly has moved right into the story and made herself at home - I approve heartily. She's like the dollop of whipped cream on top of a good piece of pie. And I loved the shift in perspective. It's so interesting to see the characters we're familiar with through the eyes of people who don't know them as well. Lovely chapter!
| Shepard 3/13/13 . chapter 47
More Cousland and Anora, less companion filler.
| Agent 94 3/13/13 . chapter 47
A little error, don't use the term China in a universe where China doesn't exist. Minor I know but minor details like that break immersion.
Other than that, awesome chapter. Mostly the reason is you focus on the normal folks.
| Zukafew119 3/12/13 . chapter 46
I do like how you explain why the Grand Cleric was so resistant to Alistair being inducted into the wardens. I do like how Alistair “demonstration,” quiets Gregoir reasons for not allowing Nerissa from being a lesion between the Circle and the Wardens. I do like how Nerissa get back at Alistair for using Smite on her and Irving. I do like the interaction between Nerissa and Eleanor. I do love how Leliana notices Nerissa’s attraction to Alistair and not only approves of it but invites her to join them in do intimate “lemony” things; know that would be a great scene to “see” or read! I do like the interaction between Cauthrien and Nerissa, with time I have feeling they will become great friends. Great chapter, continue writing more great scenes with Alistair and Nerissa; till next time!
| Zukafew119 3/12/13 . chapter 45
Thanks for doing a much anticipated smut and lemon between Corin and Anora, after all it’s been like 27 chapters since the first lemon. Great job on writting the lemon scene between Corin and Anora, it was top grade writing (like you do any less then top grade writing). I do like the scene between Alistair and Fergus, that was a nice chat that I think Alistair needed. I do like the banter between Alistair and Nerissa, particularly her embarrassment of what she did when she was drunk with lyrium. I do like how Alistair smacks’ down Gregoir by unleashing a powerful smite that knocks him off his ass and stuns him. Great chapter, till next time!
| Zxzdragon 3/12/13 . chapter 47
Great chapter! This is the best Cousland/ Anora story ever.
| SuperGravyMan 3/12/13 . chapter 47
Ah, I do always enjoy different perspectives. It's always so very interesting to see what the world outside the specific adventure thinks of it, and this is no exception. The whole thing is just given a lighter, more awestruck feel. We've been through things with Corin and company through 47 chapters now, but these people who haven't have a remarkable ability to make old things feel new again, which is doubly true for the seamstresses...
Anyway, as I said, great work, like always, and I will see you next time!
| Anon 3/11/13 . chapter 47
Another great job, can't wait for the next chapter! Also, I can't wait for when Anora and Corin find out the gender of the baby, I think it is going to be a handsome baby boy. :)
| SgtGinger 3/11/13 . chapter 47
Hehehehe yes it's finally back!
| Suilven 3/11/13 . chapter 47
Aw, I loved Master Sattler giving Nerissa the boots. What a wonderful scene.
Loved this, too:
""I was wondering if you could do an over-the-knee pair along the line of these," and the Prince gestured to the handsome blue pair of boots he was wearing, "but with a rose pattern of some sort instead. I should like to be head-to-toe golden roses on my wedding day."
Bartleby was puzzled by that. Not that it was his place to comment, but the design concept seemed a bit…flowery…for the Hero of Ferelden. Seeing his expression, the Prince chuckled. "It's a bit of a joke for the Queen. Trust me, she'll enjoy it.""
Fantastic, as always.
| Blighted114 3/11/13 . chapter 47
I adore Surana in this, she's cute and cuddley one minute and then she's burning your house down in the next minute. Corin is no doubt going to be well received by everyone, from commoner to lord, and by what we see in this chapter, he still believes himself no better than the people he rules over. I wonder how Anora will react seeing Corin covered in golden roses on the wedding day? If one flower means he is thinking inapropriate thoughts about her I wonder what a whole mass of them
| hub.1 3/11/13 . chapter 47
This continues to be one of my favorite stories. Your writing is impeccable and this is, by far, one of the best fleshed out plots I've seen. It will be interesting to see where you take this in the future. Do you have plans to continue the story past the wedding? What about the Dragon Age dlc like Awakening and Witch Hunt? Anyways, keep up the good work, and I can't wait to see the next update.