I enjoyed Cailan's ghostly presence in the vault, and I loved the choice of rings and that whole scene. It's wonderful to see Anora happy. :)

I'm very intrigued by Henriette, and what Celene is up to, as I'm sure it isn't good. *cue ominous music*

Yes! This is what I've been waiting for ever since I read "Tilt", the Orlesians coming to the forefront planning, plotting, scheming. Their whole culture, way of thinking is fascinating. Ruthless too. Unbelievably arrogant, basking in their power and alleged superiority. And ridiculous, over-the-top fashion trends! But they do control the chantry, you have to respect that. Next chapter some glimpses of the Game (hopefully)?

I hope it was Cailan's spirit-maybe it will help both of them get some peace.

It'd be interesting to know if Marjolaine is still around-she could definitely help this Orlesian mission. The story of Tilt come full circle-although isn't Henriette the one who likes horses better than people? She basically seems a decent sort-she might want to be a emigre rather than be involved in anything Celene has planned. Still, I expect her father will be threatened if she balks at any of Celene's plans.

I also hope we can see more reaction from the other countries now that the Blight is over. The First Warden, Nevarra, maybe some other counties. It will help that Corin is now seen as being the one who ended the Blight. You can expect plenty of questions from the Wardens on why Corin didn't die.

A very nice update-look forward to the next one.

Another great job, i'm excited for the next chapters already. :)

Oooh, Orlesian intrigue. A very promising chapter! Thank you!

Another splendid chapter. And thanks for the quick update.

I really liked the Anora & Corin scenes. You write the pair very well, and you can tell that they make a good match. You can see that Ferelden is in very good hands.

Oh-oh, those sneaky Orleasians, I wonder what the Empress has planned, she herself needs to be careful since isn't there growing opposition to her rule in Orlais, if I remember correctly from the lore. Regardless, the interactions between this Henriette and Corin & Anora are bound to be... interesting.

Thanks for sharing,
-Spectre4hire

Good story, like a lot of dragon age fics it's a bit long-winded but I'm enjoying it nonetheless.

More good stuff. glad to see some real development on the way towards the next threat (or speed bump at least) building up. Kinda surprised too, as I would have figured this one was on the wind down by now. But I'll certainly not complain if that isn't the case. Certainly still enjoying it. Looking forward to more when it comes.

Uh-oh we have trouble
Ahem, so, she plans to ruin their wedding? That does spice up things. Maybe Alistair will accidentally foil the empress' plans though. I know I'll be looking forward to the coming chapters.

Great chapter.
Great story.

This is an awesome story so far, love it!

Good chapter, keep it up, can't wait for the next chapter

Great chapter as always i'm very curious to see just what the orlesians have planned, but i can't imagine Anora wanting anything to do with Celene or anyone related to her close to her.

Oh those sneaky Orlesians have to plot something dont they?Can't even have tea with them without them coming up with at least 10 different elaborate ways to screw you over. So Fereldan isn't going to be 'the stupid kid who plays in the mud with the dogs' anymore 'cause in comes the soon-to-be newlyweds to spread education to all. How will everyone react to the university idea, maybe a landsmeet can be called where all the farmers give out about it sayin 'It won't help grow potatoes will it?' Ah that would be funny, A chapter about the dynamics of potatoes and education.

Loved this. The trip the vaults with Fergus was interesting. I wonder if it really was the ghost of Cailan. I'd like to think it was. Then, when they exchanged their rings...I was smiling most of the time. Also, have to say that I love Corin's sense of humor and his idea of talking dirty. *chuckles*

Then, we had this thing going on with Orlais. They are definitely manipulative individuals are they not? I almost wonder if perhaps, Henriette at least personality-wise might be suited to someone like Alistair? I know it would be confusing because I know that there seems to be chemistry between him and Nerissa.

I am definitely looking forward to seeing what will transpire here. :) Another beautiful chapter.