|Reviews for Corin|
| Cibiripilli 11/17/11 . chapter 17
Haha what a cute couple we have here! XD I like the idea of Cauthrien being made a warden.. good chapter!
| mille libri 11/17/11 . chapter 17
I'm glad they addressed the age issue, and the horse was an inspired suggestion on Anora's part. It's good for her to see Corin as a happier, more relaxed person. Can't wait to see their night together!
| Marvey4 11/17/11 . chapter 17
Good chapter. Personally, I don't think a filler chapter or two are bad for a story. They make the story balanced and not rushed if they are well written, like this one. I'm looking forward to read the next chapters.
| animevideogame freak 11/17/11 . chapter 17
damn right its not bad i wouldnt mind it happening to me lol
| spectre4hire 11/16/11 . chapter 17
Another great chapter. Every story update is a gift I am most thankful for.
You have a great handle on all the characters, especially Anora and Corin of course.
You write simple 'filler chapters' scenes wonderfully, taking the time to add depth, dialogue and wonderful character interaction.
Interesting decision with Cauthrien, as well as keeping Anora in Denerim. I'm pretty sure she had went to Redcliffe in thee game, but no matter.
The horse scene may have been a bit cliche, but it didn't stop me from enjoying it.
Thanks again, I'm looking forward to the next update.
| Mike 11/16/11 . chapter 17
A real nice chapter-I thought it might be a possibility that Cauthrien might become a Warden. I also like the reference to Tilt, and the shared horse ride between Corin and Anora. Also, the robbing the cradle comment was quite nice.
| karthik9 11/16/11 . chapter 17
it is excellent chapter i look forward to future updates
| The Lark 11/16/11 . chapter 17
You should be very proud of yourself. Anora is probably my least favorite character of all time, and you've actually got me rooting for her in this story. Her distress about "robbing the cradle" is so funny!
| Suilven 11/16/11 . chapter 17
This was lovely. I like the tentative familiarity continuing to grow between Corin and Anora and I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter. *cough* smut *cough* ;)
| Maben00 11/16/11 . chapter 17
I love this! keep up the great work )
| lazyguy90 11/16/11 . chapter 17
Great work as always. Cautherian as a possible Grey Warden? Interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter, keep at it.
| Ronin Kenshin 11/16/11 . chapter 17
that was cool a little moment for them before the storm great work
| JadeOokami 11/16/11 . chapter 17
I don't know how many times that I've read a scene where the man rides a wild(Or somewhat wild... feisty at least) horse that is amazingly black and ends up riding along with the love interest, but that doesn't mean it wasn't a nice read. As always, I enjoyed their interaction. I'm guessing that Cauthrien will be taking Logain's place then. I can't complain.
Looking forward to the next one!
| apm 11/7/11 . chapter 16
another great chapter. Can't wait for Morrigan's offer.
| mille libri 11/6/11 . chapter 16
I love how you addressed Anora's altered emotional state - every step she's taken away from the reserved, chilly woman of the game to this warm, funny woman has been believable, yet she remains recognizably her practical, logical self.