Wow, Jane just can't catch a break, can he?

I love your writting style. What a sad story, poor Jane. Calling the girl Angie was a sweet gesture.

Ahh, heart wrenching stuff. And I liked the fact that you left the cause of her death ambiguous, made the story more engaging.

Btw I am imagining that something happened to her on the job.

That's very sad but well writen ! I liked that !

what a sad story...but very well done...

Oh! so extremely beautiful, and terribly sad. And I'm sitting here, watching "the Young Victoria", another beautiful story about a deep passionate love, which also ended too soon and tragically. We all know Jane feels things very, very deeply, and if he was married to Lisbon and something happened, it just might very nearly destroy him. So glad they have a daughter, named Angie:) (nice touch). I'm also glad you didn't specify how she died, good to leave that vague; it's not about her death, it's about how (if) he'll find the strength to keep going after losing the 2nd love of his life. Now if I can just stop crying my own head off...