Gret story so far but don't leave us havging.

good twist at the end! i'm gonna go and read the 3rd one now.

OoOoOo...gets better and better...I'm gonna go read the other part!

Please finish! Its really good. But I'm kinda confused, but don't worry, that happens a lot. It dosen't mean your a bad writer, you probly want it to be confusing. But seriosly, you are doing great. Feel free to email me at: Thanks!