Make sequel please

HI this is absolutely AMAZING!
I seriously thought it was Eoin Colfer writing it untill I chekcked the name at the top!
I was wondering, how old are you?

What was the password to arty's room?

Make a second chapter! It cant end like that! You write soooooo good!

I find that interesting and would like to see more of Miles and Beckett, but Holly doesn't just kiss him randomly and Minerva is never in any current books.

SEQUELSEQUELSEQUEL

You could do a sequel! I loved this! A/H as well as family bribery YAY

Wow, Myles and Beckette are pure GENNI! And good at blackmail, lol. Good job, keep up the good work. I have a few sugestions though.

Get them to talk to Holly and make her spill some soppy romantic stuff about Arty or they will show the kissing video to Foaly and Mulch. Even if they are bluffing it, really. You know shed never live down that embarassment.

Just a thought though. It's not nessasarally a good one though. I thought through this, Myles and Bekette could bring Hartemis together. Idk tho

hahaha i bet Artemis is like (curse alert)fuck you myles and beckett(cursing over) really good you even got their toddler like accents in it awesome anyway, thanks for posting :)

I'm... impressed. yeah! great job with artemis's character. very IC

Why are you stopping? You are one of the most talented writers I have ever come across. Just because it takes a long time to get a chapter completed and online, doesn't mean that you should quit. Besides, don't you know it is completely criminal to leave a reader hanging like that! My advice to you would be to keep all of your writing in a notebook until you have a chapter completed, then you can put it online quickly and easily. The most important thing is to not give up. I hope that you will continue to add more to the story. One more piece of advice, just because no one else writes about it, doesn't mean you can't. It just gives you the pride of being the first one to write about it. Good luck!

Funny, and good! Plus you went H/A! :]

OMG! THIS IS SOOOOOO GOOD... YOU

SHOULD KEEP WRITING... THIS IS SOOOO GOOD!

really nice, I liked the cliff hanger ending; although a little more would be good; Myles and bekket finding out about foaly and stuff, and a bit more of the A/H 'luuuuurve' relationship thing going on.

Wait- why is Beckett's and Myles' room soundproofed? If a person looking to kidnap them for, oh, I don't know, ransom, would climb in through the window, Butler wouldn't hear them scream, because, you know, it's soundproofed.

"Butler wa' talkin' 'bout it. So was Mummy." said Beckett, looking very serious.

So Beckett can say "was". Why is it apostrophed in the first sentence?

The Fowl family [were] doomed. Again.

It's "was". I could almost say you didn't like the word "was", haha.

Also, please stop the fairies,(Holly and Foaly) from saying "D'arvit." for no reason. There are children around. More importantly, toddlers.

Anywho, you have a great story, and if you tweak just a little bit, it would be greater. ;D