Love this story you are doing! It is quite well written and very engaging. Please continue it. (FYI this is the first review I have ever posted, I don't deem most stories worth the time)

Huh. If some jerk just jumped in through my window I would have pushed him out...lol He is fairly creepy. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

This story is great so far. I think you have really accomplished to build up the excitement, and I am really looking forward to future chapters. Minor problem with commas, but overall, a fantastic job! Please update as soon as possible.

Omg...Firstly, I love you for updating! You are the first update in months! Second, this chapter friggin rocked! I love the intensity between the two of them. the foreshadowing was one of the best I've read on Fanfiction. I feel sorry for the poor girl but I can already tell she is going to put up one hell of a fight. :) Looking forward to reading that! I can't wait for the next chapter. :) Great job!

oh wow! This is amazing! I really hope that you start this up again, it's really good and I want to know what Max'll do next! Please update soon!

Wow, this is excellent! Very well written and interesting, and I love that they dressed up like men! That was clever and very cute! I can't wait to read what happens next!

MORE! I enjoyed just these two chapters, and now I want to know how the first chapter will tie into the prologue. I like the idea of them joking about the Goblin King, thinking he isn't real and they're just playing to superstition, and then suddenly it's all real. Keep writing!

really good! will you be continuing this?

Please update soon. And I recommend adding this story to the Clare. B Dunkle section, you will get loads more reviews.