Wow, this is really amazing. :) I love the pace you're going at and I really appreciated the twist about Kyle's undercover mission. I honestly didn't see it coming, which is rare nowadays.
Thanks for making my day!

This fanfic is love 3 *-*

okay...i...did...NOT see that coming.
That was amazing! i died from this awesome chapter O_O

omg that is so embarrassing for him! xD lmao

Dude.

That's for starters. Now, the numbers say you updated on 06-03-12, and that's, like, almost four months ago. I sure hope you haven't abandoned the story, 'cause I think...

... I think it totally kicks ass. You're one of those writers I really admire, because I still can't achieve the style you've got, and it's eating me away, but still doesn't affect my adoration. Takes guts being honest to oneself, I tell ya.

In any case, I hope this doesn't get off as the standard I-really-like-this-hope-you-update-very-soon kind of shit comment, 'cause I /really/ love this, and I /really/ hope you will continue the story. And I /really/ love your fucking style, which keeps me alert all the time, and makes me laugh at 2 after midnight, and makes me smile, and... I really need to fuck off right now and go to sleep.

Hope you read this and it (at least) wriggles out a smile on your face, because you really deserve it.

Keep up the awesome work.

Speaking of empty promises... Lol you need to update! It's been foreverrrrrr... Still love this fanfic though :) It's one of my favorites. Evar.

You have a fan here. I prefer bottom!Cartman, Kyle could easily overpower him when they were kids and got into fights.

I cannot stress how much I enjoyed your little masterpiece.. It's amazingly original, the style is raw but colorful and flows nicely and the story? I literally bit my fingers red at all the feels this gave me. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I beg of you, sweet god of love please UPDATE! Like, soon!

Awesome story! It's hard to find a good Kyman story but this is one of them. Not seeing any OOCness and the plot is really interesting, especially cartman's past. I want more!

I love ur
Story thanks
So much for updating :) u made my day and my birthday is tomorrow :D COULD u make a HOT sexy part for me ;) love u I could die :)

Looking great so far, update soon!

Kyle as a cop. That is so...sexy )

Continue this story. PLEASE! When are we gonna get to the good part?

I love how you portray the characters in this, and it's also really well written. There are a lot of Kyman fanfics where the two are out of character, Kyle, especially, which is a shame because his character is so badass as it is, but this honestly captures them perfectly. I cannot wait for you to update more :)

I just read through the entire thing, and I absolutely loved it. I used to be in SP fandom some time ago, and when I came back into it recently, I couldn't find anything that I enjoyed anymore-I originally liked SP as a teen, and now in my twenties, I want stories that pack a punch; I'm tired of teenaged fare.

Your story totally delivers! It's fast-paced, but not too rushed; it's exciting. Both Cartman and Kyle are very in character, and I love how on-the-nose Cartman is. Also, as a fan of forensics/law enforcement/court systems, I loved that aspect of the story especially. The part where Cartman insists that he will NOT pay Kyle back was wonderful, because it meant they had no contract, and Kyle, as someone involved with the law, would know this. Aha, that may be a strange thing to like, but I did!

I see that it hasn't been updated in a couple of months, but it's too early too assume that you're abandoning it, aha, so I hope you update it sometime soon, permitting your schedule/life allows for it.

Easily one of my favorites

Also, I love that the shoebox is literal, symbolic, and thematic! Great job 3