oh wow...haha this is really similar to my story, the last memory. its the same idea, yet they are still really different. youve done this really well, good job :)

Beautifully and brilliantly written!

That was stunning, and beautiful, and...just perfect.

The last line, especially, I absolutely loved.

Fantastic job on this.

This was so moving. I felt tears welling up. How you moved it to different memories and described everything was so clear.

It really was a lovely story. :)

This story is truly great, heartbreaking, but great. I liked ending, it's very, final. One small, itty-bitty thing: it should be "Mudblood" not "mud blood". :)