Aww, so precious! Very emotional, but still sweet. You did a very good job of keeping them in character despite the situation and this being your first Bleach fix. Hana and Yumi being friends made me smile, and your description of how Ikkaku and Yumi met was the best I've read. I love your fics and hope that you continue to write IkkaYumi!

Perfect! Exactly what I was looking for. You satisfied my yumichika/ikkaku muse. Nice work for sure!

Oh what a cute ending! I adore Ikkaku/Yumi fics. I love the emotions in this, and Hana is just adorable at the end. Ikakku and Yumi have to be one of my fav couple ever. There can never be too much fanfic for this couple for me. Especially well written fic like this story.

Aw...:)

I gotta admit YumiIkka is my favorite pairing. Like, of all time. This is a great story, and the end was priceless. "STOP LAUGHING, IKKAKU."

Hum, I think they're a little bit OOC, but I enjoyed it :) But I'm a fan of this pairing, so maybe it's normal

But things are going on a way pretty natural, it's not too slow, not too quick. The only think that disturb me is that they're not exactly IC when Yumichika wake up( I just can't imagine Ikkaku saying these words x)) but as I said before, I liked it though :)

I think the end is very well found It's so...so Yumichika x)

( sorry if my english isn't correct, I'm french )